Friday, September 4, 2009

55 - whispers in the wind




hear the whispers in the wind
hear the promises they bring
sighed by flick’ring candlelight
carried through star-studded night
to your guardian angel’s ear
he who knows the way is clear
to bestow on you the wishes
sung by souls in rhythmic verses
on the canvas of your dreams
hear them now around you stream…





every friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man!



42 comments:

  1. peaceful and serene ...

    beautiful.

    smiles,

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  2. What would the wind reveal? I hope it brings the best news. Very beautiful.

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  3. listen then.... sometimes they talk too laud and i had to tell then to shut up .
    sincerily , now i am expeling then all fron my life . i just want to stay alone .
    hahahh!!
    serious , i am a kardecist , here we call then obsessive spirits...i used to have a whole legion around me . now i just want to they leave me alone or i am going to punsh then !!

    ok , ok , now you think it is all crazy talk . that's ok .
    best wishes Shadow . listening or not the wispers , i still listen you !!!! hahah!!!

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  4. Beautiful. Today's poem really touched my heart.
    Blessings, andrea

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  5. Simply beautiful.

    Thank you!

    Have a Wonderful Labor Day Weekend!

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  6. a hopeful piece, of dreams to come. lovely.

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  7. "The whispers in the wind" - lovely - the notion of how they speak to you.

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  8. Love it, and I am all for a canvas of dreams...

    lovely~
    ~Calli

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  9. Shadow Dancing....
    The Princess of Prose...
    Have a Wonderful Week-End my loyal and beautiful friend....G

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  10. Shadow...this one is very rhythmic and I can catch my dreams in the wind!! Love it.

    Happy weekend.

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  11. That is right out of this world Shadow, really good them little things in life, so subtle but behind it all your higher power, fantastic

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  12. Wow Shadow another great one, really like the vibe to this.
    Have a great weekend!!!

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  13. A lovely reminder that it is Okay to dream. :)

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  14. A lovely intention and affirmation rolled into one
    Linda

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  15. Hi, This is the first time for me in your blog. I really like your writing style and I am following you..I hope to see you at Autumn Leaves.

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  16. Shadow, awesome. Love the photo. Blessings dear one.

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  17. Lovely thought to be sung to by such gentle souls.

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  18. May the promises become reality and may the sound of the wishes be ever so.

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  19. on the canvas of your dreams
    hear them now around you stream…


    loved this 55, shadow
    Well done!

    Smiles
    Sue

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  20. G'day Shadow, you know you really are an artist.Beautiful.

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  21. this was so good and just what i needed to hear today. thank you.

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  22. ..Whispers stream...

    Sometimes whispers Scream and echo and seem to vibrate their own throttle. I prefer your "stream" version rather than the the one that stays in my mind: "Snakes slither, whispering secrets and spilling lies".

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  23. Beautiful 55!
    I'm sad I didn't get to do one this week. It's been a LONG week, but now...I'm resting up during the long, wonderful weekend! ♥
    Boomer Baby Bliss

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  24. Nice poem and photo. Thanks Shadow.

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  25. You are a true artist great text, poem, great words where chosen. And I think it is your way of providing us witha glimpse of your own personal thoughts.

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  26. Stunning photo and a playful poem that seems to gain momentum in tone and rhythm: "whispers" in the first line and "hear them now" in the final line...I like the "bring/flick'ring" rhyme!

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  27. The imagery and the words just come together so well. Beautiful.

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  28. A very pretty poem, Shadow. We all seem to have the wind on our minds at the moment.
    Blessings, Star

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  29. The wind picks you up and dusts you off

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