Catch me in your arms,
I am ready to fall,
to trust in your words,
to heed to your call.
I have reached the end here,
the end of this road,
catch me as I fall,
your voice now, an echo...
picture credit: http://www.photoshopcreative.co.uk/users/451/thm1024/endoftheroad.png
58 cool comments:
Just let go the ledge, that spirit will catch you. You'll never hit the ground kiddo.
I have to agree with walking man. Beautiful tender words, fall into faith with grace my friend.
The fall we all want to make.
We all need to trust someone. How do we make it, otherwise?
Nevine
to trust enough to heed the call and then to fall - to trust enough - so rare to find the way to that trust - beautiful, lady!
interesting wv here - unity!
Oh man, what a picture!
I love this short piece. Leaping or falling into unkown spaces seems to be a prerequisite for the most important new things to start in our lives.
You will let go when you hear that whisper in your heart.
Then you will be off into another wonderful journey of contentment.
just let go...all will be well...
A lovely piece, Shadow, describing that moment when, hopefully, everything changes.
Close your eyes and fall free. You won't crash. :)
And awesome pic.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Learning to catch ourselves is the trick. Beautiful as always.
Faith is always the key when taking that leap.
That free fall is great...
But I agree with several comments you need the one you can trust to catch you
What a gorgeous piece!
first of all : i really liked the new header .... i don't know how new it is ... maybe i am late :O
oh, i crash you in my arms , don't worry .... i'll take you with me !
didn't you write this thinking about me ? well... i'll do it anyway.
There's something profoundly moving about finality.
one of the lessons i had 2 learn the hard way. dnt fall unless ur sure someone'll catch u....this is beautiful
With the picture you used for your work today, I'm not sure to say your writing is 'deep' or if it's fully trusting. I think it could go either way. Which intrigues me.
As you take the road to the end...and fall into the deep, you do hear echoes...but would it be trusting?
Golly, you really got me thinking on this one Shadow.
I look at this as the Lord catching me. Thank you Shadow. Blessings.
that's a beautiful poem, thank you
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Surrender, by any other name. Beautiful.
this conflicts in my mind, I mean I want to catch you, but i dont want to be a echo... I want you to be real and when i reach for you, to fall into my arms...
Shadow Dancing...
I Loved your 'Echo'..Echo...echo...
Dear Shadow:
Most likely you do not agree with me, but I think so. As poetic style, this poem is most pure, perfect, balanced I've read about you. This does not mean I do not appreciate everything else, but the short phrase is one of the styles I appreciate most in a poem.
With all my heart:
Debrah
I think of poets are fallen/falling souls...and much loved by many..else poetry wouldn't last this long or touch many hearts...
I too look forward to your poetry and would definitely want you to be here, Shadow :)
wishes,
devika
Shadow, when I read that last word, "echo," I swear my ears ran and I hard a voice call. Great post. Short, sweet, and to the point. Write on and thanks for the comments on my blog, it's really appreciated!
Loved it!
It's short yet it carries so many emotions!
Amazing work. The picture is great too!
Love your blog!
It takes a long long time to trust doesn't it? An echo can be a good thing because you can hear "I love you" over and over.
I thought it was Photoshop. Takes nothing away from it, though. Great image. Great verse.
I need to try to remember to let go
Absulute and absolutely delicious, SHADOW!
Thanks for your always beautiful masterpieces
When all is said and done and the last fall comes....trust in God....He will catch you.
I like how this one shows faith...
i wish i could trust again .. but am not able to. sad isnt it ?
some things you just can't fight without detriment to self. Great image for this piece. :))
the itching is coming to an end, yay!
sometimes...you just have to
trust
beautiful words
thank you
Oh, the letting go...if only...
beautiful write, Shadow, girl!
It takes a lot of trust, faith and hope to fall and know that you'll be caught. I believe that you will be though, Shadow. Release and let go.
I always think of that little mythological nymph named Echo, who was cursed to only her her own voice when it was repeating the last word of someone else.
The reverberation of that empty space, that you spell out so well.
Cheers!
soft pillows are what i'd aim for...
Forget echos, start making a melody of your own, and others may join in!
It is so hard to trust another enough to fall and let them catch us..but a wondeful experience when it works..this poem said it perfectly.
What a beautiful call.
Love it that so many blogs now feature the GCP dot!
I'm not sure how well an echo can catch you... is it too late?
Thank you dear one for your prayers.
That last line got me.
So hard to trust people sometimes..yet so easy others.
beautiful!
let go and let God is what I hear in this!
Hello dear Shadow!
Just popping in again....Thank you for visiting with me this past week. Since I've not been around on the computer much I'm trying to stop by and visit with my blogging buddies today and sending along wishes for your upcoming week...that it be a happy one!!!
Such beautiful words, and oh what a photograph to go with them. If perfection exists in a blog post, then this is that post.
What a simple yet beautiful poem!
beautiful echo :)
Catch me when I fall..
xoxo
lovely fall awaited by all!! :)
aahh I love this one.. fallllllllll... :)
Sweet bitter words and a mystic image.
It is time to follow this invisible path
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