To feel the intent of a nurturing glance,
to bask in the sunlit moon,
when water transforms to the nectar of chance,
and time builds a palace from ruins.
peaceful and hopefilled...
Love it, especially the part about water becoming nectar.
BEAUTIFUL prose!I wish to use these lines (of course with reference to you).Cheers,Blasphemous Aesthete
hmmm it makes me want to have a nap in that water. How could that be!!!??Love the last line, oh I do!
This is calm and full of the breath of life.
YOu say so much by saying so little!
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There aren't many nurturing glances in life these days. Well, there are in my life thank goodness. I live in fear of the nectar of chance. I am cowardly but I like that you write such wonderful words.
I love this...pure delightful essence.
palace from ruins, such lovely imagery. Stunning piece:)
amazing lines!! like falling in luv yet again or enjoying the day after an eclipsed night :) just luved it :)god bless!!
Ah, what I have been working towards, the palace from ruins.
Senti um olhar de carinho nas tuas palavras...talvez sinta a lua ser aquecida pelo sol!...Beijos,AL
time builds a palace from ruins...I wish i wish i wishhhhhhh!!!! Beautiful lines.. well written!Punamhttp://punamjr.wordpress.com
WHEW! F I N A L L Y I made it here in time (before the next gold nugget).Daily I wonder--chances of who or what is waiting right around the corner--and what engaging story, or one needing help, or another piece of my own puzzled history will emerge... Shadow, you arrange words to tell complete stories."...Time builds a palace from ruins." This happens so many times during my observations.Thank You
Short and direct and makes sense to me. I have learned on my journey that I gravitate to being nurtured. Blessings dear one.
This is really good stuff.
time builds a palace from ruins... ( I could dwell on that thought for hours)Dear poet friend you always make words do your bidding hope all is well
I chose the just the right day to visit...such hope in your thoughts, lovely! :))
filled with hope. Love it!
Brief, and beautiful.Thank You.
Brilliant. Succint with the feeling of peace and eternity as one goes through this poem.
And the next one....??!
Time building a palace from ruins--I like that. Hard to resurrect the past so cunningly in reality.
Vulnerable in its eagerness. I feel this way sometimes. Love it!
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