Tuesday, September 13, 2011

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To feel the intent of a nurturing glance,
to bask in the sunlit moon,
when water transforms to the nectar of chance,
and time builds a palace from ruins.


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29 comments:

  1. Love it, especially the part about water becoming nectar.

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  2. BEAUTIFUL prose!

    I wish to use these lines (of course with reference to you).


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. hmmm it makes me want to have a nap in that water. How could that be!!!??
    Love the last line, oh I do!

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  4. This is calm and full of the breath of life.

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  6. Shadow Dancing...

    We love the Short and Sweet!

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  7. There aren't many nurturing glances in life these days. Well, there are in my life thank goodness. I live in fear of the nectar of chance. I am cowardly but I like that you write such wonderful words.

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  8. I love this...pure delightful essence.

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  9. palace from ruins, such lovely imagery. Stunning piece:)

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  10. amazing lines!!
    like falling in luv yet again or enjoying the day after an eclipsed night :) just luved it :)
    god bless!!

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  11. Ah, what I have been working towards, the palace from ruins.

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  12. Senti um olhar de carinho nas tuas palavras...talvez sinta a lua ser aquecida pelo sol!...


    Beijos,
    AL

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  13. time builds a palace from ruins...

    I wish i wish i wishhhhhhh!!!!

    Beautiful lines.. well written!

    Punam
    http://punamjr.wordpress.com

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  14. WHEW! F I N A L L Y I made it here in time (before the next gold nugget).

    Daily I wonder--chances of who or what is waiting right around the corner--and what engaging story, or one needing help, or another piece of my own puzzled history will emerge...

    Shadow, you arrange words to tell complete stories.
    "...Time builds a palace from ruins." This happens so many times during my observations.
    Thank You

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  15. Short and direct and makes sense to me. I have learned on my journey that I gravitate to being nurtured. Blessings dear one.

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  16. time builds a palace from ruins... ( I could dwell on that thought for hours)

    Dear poet friend you always make words do your bidding

    hope all is well

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  17. I chose the just the right day to visit...such hope in your thoughts, lovely! :))

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  18. Brilliant. Succint with the feeling of peace and eternity as one goes through this poem.

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  19. Time building a palace from ruins--I like that. Hard to resurrect the past so cunningly in reality.

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  20. Vulnerable in its eagerness.
    I feel this way sometimes.

    Love it!

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