Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Weeping Wishes



picture credit:  http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284 



In the darkness of the dawn
man-made promises deflate,
into wisps of weeping wishes
that defeat you and negate,
as you hover on the brink
of a helplessness severe,
with the first rays of the sun,
let the truth release your fear.




13 comments:

  1. What I've always believed: The truth shall be made known unto you
    And the truth shall set you free!
    Excellent.

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  2. man made promises that survive are hard to come by but we take them and feel their sting far too often....love the strength in that last line though....nice...

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  3. I never accept a promise as a fact Shadow. A fact is a reality come to pass and I can take the reality be it in the night or the day and the dawn..Pshaw a passing moment one gets over as the light rises, a backwards dusk.

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  4. You can never trust man made promises. Humans will always disappoint us. Blessings my friend.

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  5. I love ya, v, and i know you aren't writing about me, but damn! It always seems like you are.
    And sometimes, truth is hard to face~harder to apply.
    Great poem~great pic
    Rick

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  6. I agree with Just Be Real -- high expectations = disappointments, but how do you release your fears? That, I'm having a hard time with. :\

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    1. fears acknowledged lose their hold over you...

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  7. powerful words used in this work of art shadow
    so few words can make such an impact

    Im so sorry I have been absent for way too long
    I am spending more time on-line tho no where near what I was - so good to see your work flourishing

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  8. Promises made in the heat of passion?

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  9. wisps of weeping wishes

    What lovely words to read aloud. :)

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  10. Let the truth release your fear--wonderful.

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