Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Dark is the Night



picture credit: http://osnafotos.deviantart.com/art/sadly-91017926

You came to me in my dreams last night,
you sat on my lap and you closed your eyes,
it was 3.33 when with tears I awoke,
no night is as dark ’s when the heart is broke.




23 comments:

  1. Beautifully wrought and absolutely true.

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  2. Hey love! Any news from birdy? Is he feeling any better??

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    1. sadly, yes. he's gone... what i wrote actually happened. at 3.33 am. the vet told me he passed on early this morning... thanks for caring.

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  3. interesting on the symetry of the time 3:33...and when the heart is broke, the night takes on a much deeper dark for sure....hugs. i am sorry for the loss of your bird....

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  4. Oh oh
    No good dream happens at 3:33
    Always darkest just before the dawn.
    ~rick

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  5. Oh crap, V!
    Hadn't read the comments~just jumped in blind.
    I'm so sorry bout levi
    What a shitty time for such a call
    Truly sorry, shads
    ~rick

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  6. The picture is amazing
    the tears shatter the page

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  7. SHADOW, I'm SO sorry. Especially after all the (inappropriate-sounding?) comments about laughter earlier on FB and a reply on my blog.

    But, as you know, I (really do!) speak--out loud--with birds every single day, even in rain! Often I whistle, and get the feeling we are conversing our camaraderie or love...or both. Maybe some Peeps are "scoffing"--who cares?--but I know that YOU KNOW!

    LOVE for you today, Shadow, and PEACE and (yes!) JOY.
    From Steve (steveroni)
    This moment--I am sad...

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  8. When i read todays post i knew it was real but i did n't want to come to any conclusions. I am so sorry honey! Pets are family members and nothing less so the grief is deep. I know how difficult it is to lose such a good friend.
    When my grandma died we were travelling to get to her. I was asleep in the back seat and she came to the dream. I woke up in tears, when i reached the house i did n't have to hear what my aunt had to say. I already knew.I always thought myself lucky for that last goodbye.
    Blessed be!

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  9. I don't know if my comment went through. I'm so sorry for your loss. To lose any pet is heartbreaking. I'm uplifted by the 3:33, though. Esoterically, it's a powerful number. I suspect he really did come to you.

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  10. I'm so sorry about your loss,but you did all you could do.You need to let yourself grief for a peroid of time, and then come to terms with that was nothing more you could do and that will heal you.

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  11. A beautiful poem, Shadow, and a lovely tribute to your special friend. I'm very sorry for your loss...

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  12. Breathe, Shadow just breathe and let that which causes the tears of another wash over you.

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  13. beautiful....
    this dream was like reality in so many ways.
    you always make words be a part of life that we all experience and bring out the beauty, the sadness, the emotions, up or down...become real.

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  14. Dreams can be so intense and they catch us with no defenses. I know this feeling!

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