Sunday, July 13, 2014

Lost in the mist



picture credit: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Lost-in-mist-111021687

Every cell in my body is screaming for you to take me into your hold, in that darkness of oblivion you bring to me, to carry me on that dreamy river of star-kissed waters where the rays of the full moon bestow on me the gift of you as the redeemer of my freedom, who raises me to rapture, leaves me yearning ever more...





8 comments:

  1. Loved the poem very much Shadow
    and it inspired me to write one to you . . .

    . . . . but I don't think I should print it . . . . lol

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  2. One of the more interesting situations I found myself in years ago was waking up in the middle of a clearing (where I had evidently decided to take a nap) to see a naked woman leaping about like she did not have a care in the world. There was a fairly heavy mist hanging in the air, which had left me soaking wet, and being eaten alive by chiggers kept me from fully appreciating the moment at the time.

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  3. "Lost in the mist" sounds okay to me - many worse situations to be lost in.

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  4. smiles...the longing is intense in this one...for that relief.....

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  5. hello shadow its dennis the vizsla dog hay i wuz lost in the mist wunse!!! wel ok it wuz a kanyun in the desert and it wuz hot and their wuz no mist but stil!!! i definitly wuz lost!!! ok bye

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  6. Thoroughly captivating use of language. :)

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