tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post800472584660275633..comments2023-10-26T08:21:40.425+02:00Comments on 1 door away from heaven: the desolate manShadowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-83236283514086243502009-05-13T20:25:00.000+02:002009-05-13T20:25:00.000+02:00Lovely dark words and perfect photo to accompany :...Lovely dark words and perfect photo to accompany :)TheChicGeekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10781656678543589662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-14333994321729489462009-05-12T18:41:00.000+02:002009-05-12T18:41:00.000+02:00Great words and a great photo.Great words and a great photo.Sydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05642843245634635843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-38240269355628268982009-05-12T16:07:00.000+02:002009-05-12T16:07:00.000+02:00"a silent mouth is screaming"
I liked that line a ..."a silent mouth is screaming"<br />I liked that line a lot!Helenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06481533361253699464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-76040205166391481192009-05-12T15:45:00.000+02:002009-05-12T15:45:00.000+02:00Your words compliment the picture beautifully Shad...Your words compliment the picture beautifully Shadow.<br />Blessings, StarStella Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-47619322166724948292009-05-12T14:19:00.000+02:002009-05-12T14:19:00.000+02:00so many great lines -- dark and deep -- i feel a h...so many great lines -- dark and deep -- i feel a heavy under current.<br /><br />fab writing Shadow.Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-75351329684740008792009-05-12T12:39:00.000+02:002009-05-12T12:39:00.000+02:00That very first line....oh, Shadow, believe me, th...That very first line....oh, Shadow, believe me, that tells it all if you ask me.<br /><br />And what a beautiful, wonderful Mother's Day post below. It's awesome.<br /><br />Thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your comment wishing Bud and me a happy anniversary. It meant a lot to me, truly. Happy Tuesday.Hootin Annihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08811326085498312568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-78602498861886712992009-05-12T12:15:00.000+02:002009-05-12T12:15:00.000+02:00Gosh, that picture is fantastic, I could almost fe...Gosh, that picture is fantastic, I could almost feel the spirit presence roaming it's rooms. And your poem is haunting to the end.<br /><br />CJ xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-74913092587560613832009-05-12T04:16:00.000+02:002009-05-12T04:16:00.000+02:00Spooky -- I love it! And I saved that picture for...Spooky -- I love it! And I saved that picture for future use as desktop wallpaper, too.The Oceanside Animalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16894063884048051561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-36005033435916124852009-05-12T04:04:00.000+02:002009-05-12T04:04:00.000+02:00Scream
Scream loud
Scream all night long
Scream un...Scream<br />Scream loud<br />Scream all night long<br />Scream until you're light as a feather<br /><br />Feels great <br /><br />Great postWalkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00341478577481025783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-9300653115053044252009-05-12T02:52:00.000+02:002009-05-12T02:52:00.000+02:00Shadow, to beg even for the splintery raft, that i...Shadow, to beg even for the splintery raft, that is not a good place to be. Feeling like I should swoop to rescue soon. How long would it take me if I leave Canada right now? This one is dark, indeed.Woman in a Windowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747858840088922077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-65984087434968528342009-05-12T02:36:00.000+02:002009-05-12T02:36:00.000+02:00Shadow Dancing....
This was spellbinding!!!!Shadow Dancing....<br /><br />This was spellbinding!!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-12365739830881821892009-05-12T02:01:00.000+02:002009-05-12T02:01:00.000+02:00just the way emotions flow... thank youjust the way emotions flow... thank youlaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-40863328680357043112009-05-12T01:26:00.000+02:002009-05-12T01:26:00.000+02:00That is one dark and dreary poem. Perfect for six ...That is one dark and dreary poem. Perfect for six days of rain and no sun.Dr.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02752941912945095736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-87307347726989668662009-05-12T01:09:00.000+02:002009-05-12T01:09:00.000+02:00Shadow you are an unbelievably
excellent writer, a...Shadow you are an unbelievably<br />excellent writer, a shepherd of<br />the emotions, the heart.<br />My emotions are running amok and<br />this poem whirls around my gowns.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-45842098297936254792009-05-12T00:57:00.000+02:002009-05-12T00:57:00.000+02:00Shads-Can't have light without darkness, can we? I...Shads-Can't have light without darkness, can we? I don't know bout the surrendering. At that point why not fight back? Well put together, again. ~rickRikkijhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10933627704520555139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-89530751314168567532009-05-12T00:22:00.000+02:002009-05-12T00:22:00.000+02:00This is dark and scary. Didn't you have a nice Mo...This is dark and scary. Didn't you have a nice Mother's Day? Isn't the sun shining in your neck of the woods? Have you gotten out and planted tomatoes?Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-38544156123907392642009-05-11T22:23:00.000+02:002009-05-11T22:23:00.000+02:00Loved the darkness. I especially loved the last st...Loved the darkness. I especially loved the last stanza. Very well-written!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-37317396976351588702009-05-11T21:59:00.000+02:002009-05-11T21:59:00.000+02:00What I like about this poem is its grip on the rea...What I like about this poem is its grip on the reader, tightening closer and closer.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-60035434890056032692009-05-11T21:23:00.000+02:002009-05-11T21:23:00.000+02:00you had me at "quicksand of emotions" that is exac...you had me at "quicksand of emotions" that is exactly where i was all weekend. this is not so much dark to me as the reality of it is when i choose to be there, sometimes i don't even know i am there until it is too late.clean and crazyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156586299182570611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-48355756778355033692009-05-11T20:57:00.000+02:002009-05-11T20:57:00.000+02:00If that's hell, I've been there. Did not say, "Don...If that's hell, I've been there. Did not say, "Done that!"<br /><br />Got out before the fires consumed all....steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-33864449846442229742009-05-11T20:51:00.000+02:002009-05-11T20:51:00.000+02:00lots of great lines here,
i really like the "quick...lots of great lines here,<br />i really like the "quicksand of emotions" - sometimes when everything runs negative it can feel like quicksand.LarryGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04149803030730349791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-37726432268454672232009-05-11T20:33:00.000+02:002009-05-11T20:33:00.000+02:00Shadow - "frozen in this state
souls reduced to as...Shadow - "frozen in this state<br />souls reduced to ashes<br />anaesthetized, sedate..."<br /><br />I am grateful to read you...Wait. What?https://www.blogger.com/profile/16914656489970904052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-80826327830243637792009-05-11T20:31:00.000+02:002009-05-11T20:31:00.000+02:00Reminds me of a desolate man looking for another d...Reminds me of a desolate man looking for another drink...Martyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048847365398559366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-61372514351288477882009-05-11T19:52:00.000+02:002009-05-11T19:52:00.000+02:00Wow, this is certainly a dark/deep one. Well writ...Wow, this is certainly a dark/deep one. Well written as always, thanks for sharing your talent.in time outhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05182919583083167454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-87811322019176646482009-05-11T19:07:00.000+02:002009-05-11T19:07:00.000+02:00This is definitely a dark one -- but an excellent ...This is definitely a dark one -- but an excellent expression of that deeply penetrating angst that grips your heart. It's raining and dark here in Dallas -- more than I can take on a dreary Monday morning!Cori Lynn Berghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13456599398461723452noreply@blogger.com