tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post3544711459584485432..comments2023-10-26T08:21:40.425+02:00Comments on 1 door away from heaven: the thread in the nightShadowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-82453535948563645632010-04-15T15:14:48.502+02:002010-04-15T15:14:48.502+02:00Dear aspiring Aunt: well is sure as hell ain't...Dear aspiring Aunt: well is sure as hell ain't no lil uation. No-sir-rhee-bob not only does he hail from Huong Kuong thai won disAINTlilUATION<br />nope, bigger than BIG graduation.<br />(if my mother was in ear shot I would have said Grad U mother effing cock smoking G sus you Asian):)<br />I mean it as a term of endearment<br /><br /><br />if This is BY US (thisisby.us) was still around then hewrites would understand.<br /><br />and in honour of my dusty (backwards ways of doing things things I'll end it with this)<br /><br />Re: Thank You!<br />(will you dusty me?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-49632714461660326622010-04-13T21:24:09.718+02:002010-04-13T21:24:09.718+02:00what a post dis is??
Truly beutiful, d power of da...what a post dis is??<br />Truly beutiful, d power of darkness i sumtyms so strong dat we hv to kneel before it, but standing up again & try to defeat it is d true purpose of lyf........as i thinkThe Aspiranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06394182210601621226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-32087930172788783392010-04-13T20:41:17.145+02:002010-04-13T20:41:17.145+02:00every last one of you will be captured, you are so...every last one of you will be captured, you are soooooo past that point of getting away with ANYTHING!!<br />(that is EXACTLY the stuff I am talking about rick!!!)<br /><br />NOW IT"S DARK<br /><br />evidently you all mistook the debil for JEBUS you are ALL mine in due time, today only offer:I will give you $5 cash money for you soul, after midnite tonite I just start taking them. and Mark my dirty dusty words I will eventually strip you of your soul<br />it's my function your world means nuthinwhohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17685473418191606910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-58876847002314767512010-04-13T12:07:46.966+02:002010-04-13T12:07:46.966+02:00The first stanza is a beauty. The rest of the poem...The first stanza is a beauty. The rest of the poem contributes sentiments I have often felt. They are difficult to convey in a poem. This is impressive - very!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-64795180003634050272010-04-13T05:04:11.879+02:002010-04-13T05:04:11.879+02:00V-where is this place you're taking me and why...V-where is this place you're taking me and why? is it a location or a thought process that leads us to the place? will you, tomorrow, show us a way to avoid capture? I take your words very seriously, Shadow. Beyond their beauty.<br />~rickRickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12466743523566419268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-45223552794962641632010-04-13T01:04:17.436+02:002010-04-13T01:04:17.436+02:00sounds dark out there shadow, even with the street...sounds dark out there shadow, even with the street lights.<br /><br />better keep one hand on that thread and just keep moving forward.<br /><br />even when it feels like you like it won't end.<br /><br />remember to keep your head, speak both languages living and dead.<br /><br />and every *ting* in between<br /><br />Italiano Espanol Italiano<br /><br />Svenska Francais Slovensky Espanol English Italia<br /><br />"c'è l'amore nel cielo! hay amore en el cielo!Det är kärlek i luften!je ljubezen v nebo!There is love in the sky lovely shadow!"<br /><br />fear not the day the spirit departs this earthly world, for a loving meal is being cooked in the sky, prepared by my mother's hand<br /><br />hold onto to the thread and keep moving<br /><br />I'll meet you on the other side just like our words said<br /><br />the kind words you typed and I read, my random translation from my ever spinning head<br /><br />here is your order from the looking glass store lovely shadow:everything that was typed herein. I am not a writer, I'm a translator <br /><br />here are your words, hear her words<br /><br />"the peace you seek comes from within"whohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17685473418191606910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-16492325656030480772010-04-12T17:54:30.254+02:002010-04-12T17:54:30.254+02:00Intense!Intense!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-50835576655588040682010-04-12T17:33:02.537+02:002010-04-12T17:33:02.537+02:00There is a lot of dark forces gathering over here ...There is a lot of dark forces gathering over here that seem to have hate at the core. I don't like it and wish that we could put aside differences and work towards a better world.Sydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05642843245634635843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-79999236486831806132010-04-12T14:20:37.953+02:002010-04-12T14:20:37.953+02:00I hope that fog doesn't have you in its grip.I hope that fog doesn't have you in its grip.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-18081907037570412062010-04-12T13:39:19.576+02:002010-04-12T13:39:19.576+02:00Hi Shadow
I like your poetry a lot. Hopefully in ...Hi Shadow<br /><br />I like your poetry a lot. Hopefully in a few years I'll write like this too. You have so many different styles of writing. I guess practice makes perfect. <br /><br />You should enjoy what's left of this Monday fellow South African. :)Bernadinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17946682013150350542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-1682716471901996282010-04-12T05:46:32.069+02:002010-04-12T05:46:32.069+02:00Eek -- a good night to stay home.Eek -- a good night to stay home.The Oceanside Animalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16894063884048051561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-73475431457077877072010-04-12T02:08:44.825+02:002010-04-12T02:08:44.825+02:00Wow, dark and powerful. Thanks!Wow, dark and powerful. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-27008679767061155732010-04-12T02:05:54.550+02:002010-04-12T02:05:54.550+02:00I know that darkness and have been able to overcom...I know that darkness and have been able to overcome. Many don't. Amazingly well described.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-58708631034537412652010-04-12T00:04:45.506+02:002010-04-12T00:04:45.506+02:00How appreciatively dark. The fog on the soul...(Hu...How appreciatively dark. The fog on the soul...(Hugs)IndigoSage Ravenwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17143502548162174269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-56183501410070497262010-04-11T22:39:02.090+02:002010-04-11T22:39:02.090+02:00Wow. Too few of us have the courage to voice thos...Wow. Too few of us have the courage to voice those feelings when they overtake us. But, we can't face what we don't acknowledge. Very brave and powerful!Pam Jarnaginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13131749848888316164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-31447551737712871232010-04-11T21:11:24.470+02:002010-04-11T21:11:24.470+02:00I see a war within, between good and evil. Your p...I see a war within, between good and evil. Your physical images could be emotional scars and struggles.Paul Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01836602667355512504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-80535658482955090852010-04-11T17:23:48.125+02:002010-04-11T17:23:48.125+02:00Ouch! Night has always been feared, though we are ...Ouch! Night has always been feared, though we are probably more fearful in cities than anywhere else. Night brings out our instincts, predators' as well as preys'.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-82087465054345060142010-04-11T17:02:31.046+02:002010-04-11T17:02:31.046+02:00This was so descriptive I could nearly feel the da...This was so descriptive I could nearly feel the darkness and evil!! Very, very powerful.Bernadinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12021888144880072183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-10760466084402969662010-04-11T14:39:57.027+02:002010-04-11T14:39:57.027+02:00WOW woman shadow, Where and what have you been to?...WOW woman shadow, Where and what have you been to?<br />You've been missed so long(what we are used to) and you come with this masterpiece of nightmare... Only YOU can lead us to such places with such words<br /><br />;)Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-11425479057887721412010-04-11T13:25:05.600+02:002010-04-11T13:25:05.600+02:00Wow! Such a dark mysterious night! I guess the dar...Wow! Such a dark mysterious night! I guess the darkness always arises the best and the worst feelings of the human being!Silviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895191247297700626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-37499521853916161122010-04-11T13:21:33.720+02:002010-04-11T13:21:33.720+02:00My dear Shadow....have you been missed terribly? ...My dear Shadow....have you been missed terribly? Yes indeed!!!<br /><br />And this one that you come back with in your writing...it's so chilling, yet so brilliant. I love the last line...it tied it all up.<br /><br />Excellent.<br /><br />PS...no, I haven't seen Date Night. Not yet. :o)Hootin Annihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08811326085498312568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-16139654192185828032010-04-11T12:06:21.073+02:002010-04-11T12:06:21.073+02:00When I have to fear the night I may as well let it...When I have to fear the night I may as well let it have me for then there will be no peaceful portion of the day left for just me. <br /><br />Be Well Shadow and Scream at the fog it fears you more than you it.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-69123379610669184192010-04-11T10:44:03.738+02:002010-04-11T10:44:03.738+02:00Beautiful,lovely and fantastic shot !! Nice words ...Beautiful,lovely and fantastic shot !! Nice words !! Amazing !!Unseen Rajasthanhttp://unseenrajasthan.com/unseenjourneynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-17458161890984077272010-04-11T05:51:05.633+02:002010-04-11T05:51:05.633+02:00This was a creepy one!This was a creepy one!Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-14510858064420071632010-04-11T05:33:08.349+02:002010-04-11T05:33:08.349+02:00Evil is definitely out there... and closer than ma...Evil is definitely out there... and closer than many of us want to imagine. But fear is really our greatest enemy - the traitor which steals our light and allows evil to gain ground. The opposite of fear is love. Hold on to that.<br /><br />No one evokes mood quite like you, Shadow. This piece is brilliant, as always. The feeling of chaos you created with the rhythm of your words - growing longer and faster toward the end - was outstanding and original.Felicitashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02365380167385885738noreply@blogger.com