tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post3669338630749888978..comments2023-10-26T08:21:40.425+02:00Comments on 1 door away from heaven: anarchyShadowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-68485682911786810562009-08-19T15:15:24.619+02:002009-08-19T15:15:24.619+02:00I like this - alot. What does that say about me. ...I like this - alot. What does that say about me. I like it flows or rather, doesn't flow, but is. No rhyme. None needed. Wouldn't be warranted here. And then the escape at the end, into darkness. Is it really an escape at all? Hum. Lots to think on.Woman in a Windowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747858840088922077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-14216164820975051962009-08-19T08:56:08.959+02:002009-08-19T08:56:08.959+02:00War is like that, run from the fire to the dark. N...War is like that, run from the fire to the dark. No safe place in a kill zone.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-77446915269232595342009-08-19T07:37:00.481+02:002009-08-19T07:37:00.481+02:00Being a New Yorker, you can imagine what this make...Being a New Yorker, you can imagine what this makes me think of. Evocative as always.The Oceanside Animalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16894063884048051561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-22829620549527387402009-08-19T04:33:49.535+02:002009-08-19T04:33:49.535+02:00Why do I have this feeling that I know exactly wha...Why do I have this feeling that I know exactly what you're talking about lately? I mean, besides the fact that you are an excellent writer?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-46043559402449126082009-08-19T04:21:43.220+02:002009-08-19T04:21:43.220+02:00Intense and deeply profound writing, Shadow.
......Intense and deeply profound writing, Shadow. <br /><br />...and I too am reminded of the film 'The Pianist'...such chaos...<br /><br />~CalliCallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00354988534434872490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-453880381909470712009-08-19T04:20:24.856+02:002009-08-19T04:20:24.856+02:00If you didn't experience something like what y...If you didn't experience something like what you describe, than you definitely put yourself in someone shoes very well when you wrote it. Chilling story you've woven.Aprilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12089235988240437106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-53288444698794103092009-08-19T03:37:01.555+02:002009-08-19T03:37:01.555+02:00truly, war is hell :(truly, war is hell :(laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-22891742393758443492009-08-19T03:06:01.287+02:002009-08-19T03:06:01.287+02:00That's quite the picture! Goes well with the ...That's quite the picture! Goes well with the poem though!Katehttp://www.recommendeddailydose.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-47030886136188957532009-08-19T02:22:56.628+02:002009-08-19T02:22:56.628+02:00YOU`write beautifully.
Love the term Shadow danci...YOU`write beautifully. <br />Love the term Shadow dancing<br />LindaLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-62681018824327987722009-08-19T02:19:13.615+02:002009-08-19T02:19:13.615+02:00OOH!!! The CHILLS that come when realising that Ni...OOH!!! The CHILLS that come when realising that Night be the only escape-- and it no picnic, many hath proven to me...<br /><br />Beautiful, Lady Shadow... absolutely so.<br /><br />c.Cygnus MacLlyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15501567755613392501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-67736970229352389572009-08-19T01:51:02.642+02:002009-08-19T01:51:02.642+02:00It seems we are both posting about events involvin...It seems we are both posting about events involving anger as of late. Actually, I've noticed it in a lot of blogger's posts recently.<br /><br />Sorry,that was a random thought that occurred to me. As for your writing and this post, it is expressively vivid- like a canvass filled with the darker paints of oils smeared over the pale of pastels gone awry. Beautiful yet haunting in the mind's eye. It stifles one to remember and yet you can't seem to forget. It takes hold of your readers and demands their attention. Well done Shadow, well done.findingmywingsinlifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09266911119841941945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-50864543839534069832009-08-19T01:38:28.478+02:002009-08-19T01:38:28.478+02:00Shads- isn't it something when darkness is the...Shads- isn't it something when darkness is the only escape? One holds their breath to the telling and shock takes hold. A different flavor from you. Quite interesting. ~rickRikkijhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10933627704520555139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-27373665321321582572009-08-19T00:22:17.009+02:002009-08-19T00:22:17.009+02:00There are quite a few of your poems that I've ...There are quite a few of your poems that I've tagged as your "finest work". This one, beats them all. <br /><br />It is probably the theme. But, then it is also your writing style that delivered it so well to me. <br /><br />Brilliant! Just brilliant! Keep writing!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-34579295058693624942009-08-18T23:53:51.497+02:002009-08-18T23:53:51.497+02:00can it, could it, would it happen?
who knows,
but...can it, could it, would it happen?<br />who knows,<br /> but you have surely laid out a scenario -<br /><br />an analogy for heartbreak?<br />a personality in overload,<br />grief possessed...<br /><br />thinking of you shadow!LarryGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04149803030730349791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-22862760037590534242009-08-18T22:20:05.063+02:002009-08-18T22:20:05.063+02:00You created a dismal place, too scary and chaotic ...You created a dismal place, too scary and chaotic to imagine.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-48445771644694893692009-08-18T21:42:16.758+02:002009-08-18T21:42:16.758+02:00Shocking, noisy, terrible. A lesson in History, re...Shocking, noisy, terrible. A lesson in History, reminding us of past revolutions. I know... It still does happen nowadays. Brilliant description.Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09488349215933429299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-7744321592518005252009-08-18T18:56:07.792+02:002009-08-18T18:56:07.792+02:00reminding us that this is still going on in parts ...reminding us that this is still going on in parts of the world, children being killed for no reason, women trying to protect them, hide and run for freedom, while the sky seems to be crumbling around them. How so many had not a choice but to escape in the dark.<br /><br /> ty for sharing and reminding to to pray for those who still are trying to escape. SMILESAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-47843694724849321492009-08-18T18:28:41.464+02:002009-08-18T18:28:41.464+02:00If only it WAS a 'muted movie'.If only it WAS a 'muted movie'.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-76220422247733186572009-08-18T18:24:26.170+02:002009-08-18T18:24:26.170+02:00thanks Shadow. I wonder about the anarchy that exi...thanks Shadow. I wonder about the anarchy that exists in this world. And at times it does seem so dark.Sydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05642843245634635843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-45653964466376342612009-08-18T17:57:37.558+02:002009-08-18T17:57:37.558+02:00eerily sombering write here. Scary to think, this...eerily sombering write here. Scary to think, this is actually happening somewhere outside our protective walls. The end so true, the only place to go, forward.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-20593450748316689882009-08-18T17:38:27.917+02:002009-08-18T17:38:27.917+02:00Wonderful, you took my mind to so many trouble pla...Wonderful, you took my mind to so many trouble places today, a world torn apart by violence, ignorance and intolerance. Your poetry is like a fine crafted reporter making us feel what they are seeing. <br />Thankswolfie185https://www.blogger.com/profile/08113710218994046562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-34310193202602330352009-08-18T17:38:02.308+02:002009-08-18T17:38:02.308+02:00Amazing how you take us right to that place. It sa...Amazing how you take us right to that place. It saddens me all the trials and tribulations throughout the world...and then the observers is right! Take care.Cindy https://www.blogger.com/profile/03552572705763406197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-87139840691211390252009-08-18T17:33:32.393+02:002009-08-18T17:33:32.393+02:00Beautiful, powerful writing.Beautiful, powerful writing.bardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15130589527012329455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-18852081859096499542009-08-18T17:17:09.837+02:002009-08-18T17:17:09.837+02:00wow, this is part of the history of the last gener...wow, this is part of the history of the last generations here , my parents against dictatorship , and me at the 80's as a anarco-punk against everything corporative around in those wars we made at down-town .<br />thank you honey . <br /> when i started to read i didn't see this way i describe now , at first it sounded as a very personal feeling of my every day life .Caio Fernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11592097138751108428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3625138782476481808.post-37845229400858917232009-08-18T16:53:36.586+02:002009-08-18T16:53:36.586+02:00I'd say you were in Tower Number Two
God so l...I'd say you were in Tower Number Two<br /><br />God so loves you to have given you this talent (5%) and you must so love us to give us the rest of it--your work (95%)...Thank you, Shadow...Shadow. (sigh!)steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.com