Friday, September 4, 2009

55 - whispers in the wind




hear the whispers in the wind
hear the promises they bring
sighed by flick’ring candlelight
carried through star-studded night
to your guardian angel’s ear
he who knows the way is clear
to bestow on you the wishes
sung by souls in rhythmic verses
on the canvas of your dreams
hear them now around you stream…





every friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man!



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41 comments:

  1. Dulçe ♥September 4, 2009 at 2:53:00 PM GMT+2

    Really cool, Shadow. BEautiful 55

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  2. HeleneSeptember 4, 2009 at 3:10:00 PM GMT+2

    lovely and what a beautiful photo!

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  3. Kathy LynneSeptember 4, 2009 at 4:15:00 PM GMT+2

    listening.....

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  4. JessieSeptember 4, 2009 at 4:51:00 PM GMT+2

    peaceful and serene ...

    beautiful.

    smiles,

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  5. SylviaSeptember 4, 2009 at 5:28:00 PM GMT+2

    What would the wind reveal? I hope it brings the best news. Very beautiful.

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  6. LouSeptember 4, 2009 at 5:59:00 PM GMT+2

    I think I hear it;)

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  7. Caio FernSeptember 4, 2009 at 6:10:00 PM GMT+2

    listen then.... sometimes they talk too laud and i had to tell then to shut up .
    sincerily , now i am expeling then all fron my life . i just want to stay alone .
    hahahh!!
    serious , i am a kardecist , here we call then obsessive spirits...i used to have a whole legion around me . now i just want to they leave me alone or i am going to punsh then !!

    ok , ok , now you think it is all crazy talk . that's ok .
    best wishes Shadow . listening or not the wispers , i still listen you !!!! hahah!!!

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  8. AndreaSeptember 4, 2009 at 6:15:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful. Today's poem really touched my heart.
    Blessings, andrea

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  9. TheChicGeekSeptember 4, 2009 at 6:29:00 PM GMT+2

    Simply beautiful.

    Thank you!

    Have a Wonderful Labor Day Weekend!

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  10. KaySeptember 4, 2009 at 6:35:00 PM GMT+2

    a hopeful piece, of dreams to come. lovely.

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  11. UnknownSeptember 4, 2009 at 7:25:00 PM GMT+2

    "The whispers in the wind" - lovely - the notion of how they speak to you.

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  12. clean and crazySeptember 4, 2009 at 7:37:00 PM GMT+2

    very sweet and peaceful 55!!

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  13. CalliSeptember 4, 2009 at 9:24:00 PM GMT+2

    Love it, and I am all for a canvas of dreams...

    lovely~
    ~Calli

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  14. g-manSeptember 4, 2009 at 10:13:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow Dancing....
    The Princess of Prose...
    Have a Wonderful Week-End my loyal and beautiful friend....G

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  15. Hootin AnniSeptember 4, 2009 at 11:53:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow...this one is very rhythmic and I can catch my dreams in the wind!! Love it.

    Happy weekend.

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  16. Dr.JohnSeptember 5, 2009 at 12:36:00 AM GMT+2

    Very beautiful imagery.
    Great 55

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  17. MichaelSeptember 5, 2009 at 12:42:00 AM GMT+2

    That is right out of this world Shadow, really good them little things in life, so subtle but behind it all your higher power, fantastic

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  18. wolfie185September 5, 2009 at 12:55:00 AM GMT+2

    Wow Shadow another great one, really like the vibe to this.
    Have a great weekend!!!

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  19. Byz.September 5, 2009 at 2:24:00 AM GMT+2

    A lovely reminder that it is Okay to dream. :)

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  20. Linda S. SochaSeptember 5, 2009 at 2:46:00 AM GMT+2

    A lovely intention and affirmation rolled into one
    Linda

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  21. big JennSeptember 5, 2009 at 3:39:00 AM GMT+2

    you rock the 55!jeNN

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  22. ZeeSeptember 5, 2009 at 3:48:00 AM GMT+2

    Hi, This is the first time for me in your blog. I really like your writing style and I am following you..I hope to see you at Autumn Leaves.

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  23. Just Be RealSeptember 5, 2009 at 6:02:00 AM GMT+2

    Shadow, awesome. Love the photo. Blessings dear one.

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  24. CiCiSeptember 5, 2009 at 7:00:00 AM GMT+2

    Lovely thought to be sung to by such gentle souls.

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  25. the walking manSeptember 5, 2009 at 9:30:00 AM GMT+2

    May the promises become reality and may the sound of the wishes be ever so.

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  26. DishiliciousSeptember 5, 2009 at 9:43:00 AM GMT+2

    absolutely beautiful!

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  27. UnknownSeptember 5, 2009 at 10:54:00 AM GMT+2

    on the canvas of your dreams
    hear them now around you stream…


    loved this 55, shadow
    Well done!

    Smiles
    Sue

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  28. linda maySeptember 5, 2009 at 2:07:00 PM GMT+2

    G'day Shadow, you know you really are an artist.Beautiful.

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  29. Brian MillerSeptember 5, 2009 at 5:58:00 PM GMT+2

    this was so good and just what i needed to hear today. thank you.

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  30. One Prayer GirlSeptember 5, 2009 at 8:55:00 PM GMT+2

    Lovely, as always, Shadow.

    PG

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  31. TERI REES WANGSeptember 5, 2009 at 9:26:00 PM GMT+2

    ..Whispers stream...

    Sometimes whispers Scream and echo and seem to vibrate their own throttle. I prefer your "stream" version rather than the the one that stays in my mind: "Snakes slither, whispering secrets and spilling lies".

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  32. ♥ Boomer ♥September 5, 2009 at 9:34:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful 55!
    I'm sad I didn't get to do one this week. It's been a LONG week, but now...I'm resting up during the long, wonderful weekend! ♥
    Boomer Baby Bliss

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  33. SydSeptember 5, 2009 at 10:13:00 PM GMT+2

    Nice poem and photo. Thanks Shadow.

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  34. Mariana SofferSeptember 6, 2009 at 2:24:00 AM GMT+2

    You are a true artist great text, poem, great words where chosen. And I think it is your way of providing us witha glimpse of your own personal thoughts.

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  35. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2009 at 5:47:00 AM GMT+2

    Stunning photo and a playful poem that seems to gain momentum in tone and rhythm: "whispers" in the first line and "hear them now" in the final line...I like the "bring/flick'ring" rhyme!

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  36. GaiaSeptember 6, 2009 at 7:08:00 AM GMT+2

    The imagery and the words just come together so well. Beautiful.

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  37. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2009 at 7:22:00 AM GMT+2

    Beautiful, hopeful...

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  38. Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in ProgressSeptember 6, 2009 at 4:48:00 PM GMT+2

    beautiful and dreamy!

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  39. Stella JonesSeptember 6, 2009 at 5:46:00 PM GMT+2

    A very pretty poem, Shadow. We all seem to have the wind on our minds at the moment.
    Blessings, Star

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  40. WalkerSeptember 7, 2009 at 1:14:00 AM GMT+2

    The wind picks you up and dusts you off

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  41. Woman in a WindowSeptember 7, 2009 at 1:57:00 PM GMT+2

    It seems the wind is friend to many of us.

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