Thursday, February 19, 2009

you are here with me




golden rays that touch the morn
watching ships on blue seaborne
through the music of misty foghorn
you are here with me

scents of perfume breezes bring
bells that ring in gold casing
trees that whisper in clearing
say you’re here with me

stormy days that hug you close
deserted mountains with echoes
rapturous smile from bright rainbows
brings you close to me

touch intense by fingers true
gaze adoring through eyes so blue
words that never say adieu
i know you’re here with me



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22 comments:

  1. CynthiaFebruary 19, 2009 at 11:57:00 AM GMT+2

    Beautiful Shadow. Touching, your
    poem has the quality of a precious
    hymn.

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  2. Hootin AnniFebruary 19, 2009 at 12:42:00 PM GMT+2

    Awesome...the favorite section for me this fine day is the very first...the sea!!! With the golden rays of morn and the ships on blue seaborne, and the misty foghorn...having someone with you, here with me.....LOVE it!!!

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  3. SydFebruary 19, 2009 at 1:36:00 PM GMT+2

    Nice, Shadow. I believe that when I'm missing someone, they are with me in all the elements around. A reminder to me that they are with me in my heart.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2009 at 3:22:00 PM GMT+2

    yes!

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  5. mollyFebruary 19, 2009 at 3:40:00 PM GMT+2

    i enjoyed the chat yesterday. hope you have a lovely rest of your day :)

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  6. MojoFebruary 19, 2009 at 4:17:00 PM GMT+2

    Wow. Is it still Valentine's Day on your side of the world? You could sell that one to Hallmark.

    And I mean that in a good way, okay? It's beautiful.

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  7. RikkijFebruary 19, 2009 at 4:42:00 PM GMT+2

    Jeez, Shadow-I'm seein big puffy slow rollin clouds, lighthouses. Hearin the bells..and more. Really really fine. I think all that have ever touched you and had you near have been most fortunate, indeed. ~Rick

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2009 at 4:42:00 PM GMT+2

    Mojo's right. You should be working for Hallmark.

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  9. Tabitha.MontgomeryFebruary 19, 2009 at 6:28:00 PM GMT+2

    When is the book coming out?

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  10. clean and crazyFebruary 19, 2009 at 6:45:00 PM GMT+2

    This is such a very nice way to think of your love when they are away.

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  11. steveroniFebruary 19, 2009 at 7:29:00 PM GMT+2

    Made me think of God, like praying that He is with me. Or thanking Him for all the beauty He provides. Or letting Him know that I apprciate with gratitude, all the gifts of nature, color, sond, touch, taste, smell.

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  12. Khaled KEMFebruary 19, 2009 at 8:50:00 PM GMT+2

    Another impressive state of mind Shadow.

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  13. JackFebruary 19, 2009 at 9:12:00 PM GMT+2

    I can picture it; golden sun, the blue ocean and that foghorn calling out...Lovely!

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  14. MaryFebruary 19, 2009 at 9:14:00 PM GMT+2

    I love the line "touch intense by fingers true". What fabulous imagery!

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  15. OpaqueFebruary 19, 2009 at 9:45:00 PM GMT+2

    Simply beautiful!!!

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  16. big JennFebruary 19, 2009 at 10:49:00 PM GMT+2

    This would make great song lyrics. jeNN

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  17. G-ManFebruary 20, 2009 at 1:29:00 AM GMT+2

    What a romantic!

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  18. Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in ProgressFebruary 20, 2009 at 1:52:00 AM GMT+2

    wonderful! "story days that hug you close" that sounds so perfect.

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  19. Femin SusanFebruary 20, 2009 at 4:01:00 AM GMT+2

    I like your poem - it has shape in the way you presented it.

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  20. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2009 at 7:21:00 AM GMT+2

    Beautiful~

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  21. OpaqueFebruary 20, 2009 at 7:48:00 AM GMT+2

    A very good one Shadow!!!

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  22. Hurricane MeFebruary 21, 2009 at 4:15:00 AM GMT+2

    i know this feeling all too well.

    your gift with words is excellent.

    i wonder if it simply flows out of you once you put the pen in hand? my favorites always seem to pour out as seamlessly as the ink.

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