life and existence without a time piece...that would be amazing...either i can move so fluid or life is just not as busy...smiles.
A beautiful piece!
Miss your overdue wonderful inspiring post Shadow! Blessings dear one.
Beautifully written. Shadow, I must ask....just how long does it take you to come up with perfection like this? Do you just sit down and the keyboard and it comes to you naturally and quickly? Or, does it take you hours/days to work on your prose?Any case, you KNOW I LOVE what you write.
These days, that's where I find my release - in the land of dreams.Beautiful piece, Shadow - as always.
Exactly. You and I are on the same time this week. The world of no time. Just Being.
i love this. beautiful words, you can feel the movement. somewhere there is light...warm smiles dear Shadow,
I love this soft sad feeling about your writings. It fills me with things I can't put into words. Brilliant!
the path less traveled, you'll find me there...:)short, sweet and exactly to the right point.
The epitome of serenity, to live without rush, worry - just letting every moment play out one after another. (Hugs)Indigo
The last two lines were breathtaking-the whole thing was.
THIS is near-perfect blog-bliss:To be capable of reading, understanding, and loving a blog post, all within a single ventilatory cycle. Ventilatory, not a poetic word, but isn't it pretty? I knew it, but had to look it up anyway to make certainShadow, After convention I met two Peeps from Johannesburg. I should write you rather than comment this.....Also NOTE: The MOST beautifully designed and colored flag IMO, wasSouth Africa! Outstanding...at the convention opening ceremony!Thank you for your TOO kind comment. It is good to know you.
You have brilliantly captured the air of limitlessness... :)
its beautiful.......being bad at poetry hv to read it many tyms nd also preious comments to understand it's essence,nd got it too much xtent......
Ah, a time when I can ease under the sheets and escape reality, this is so beautifully perfect Shadow!
It would be nice to have that kind of escape.
Really just awesome, Shadow! I'm working on my poetry right now, too, and I always making my poems into long stories...maybe this is my style in poetry?My voice in poetry? Still working on it though! Your piece is a fine example of what I want my poetry to become. Short, sweet, and to the point! But of course, in my own style. :DWrite on!
so many people are afraid to embrace the dark... to me, it's the other half of life... well said
I like to think that there have been moments lately when I haven't much kept track of time. Retirement is awesome.
I can hardly imagine. I must need to try harder.
Beautiful thoughts. For me, Black velvet skies mark my own free time. More-so in Winter :)
Reminds me of eternity.I invite you to visit anf follow my blog.
I don't have an iphone or a crackberry or even a cell phone. But I can't move without my wristwatch. Sorry, I just HAVE to know the time.
Beautiful... now if only we could let go like this in the figurative sense while remaining on this mundane plane. One day, perhaps.
This one has to be one of my all time favorites that you've written. I love it. It takes me to a wonderful place.
My neice sent me an imagined dialogue between a newly deceased man and a fatherly image of god recently. The questions asked by the man to the image were answered in such a way as to repeatedly make note that the man himself was the universe and that everyone he remembered, as he remembered, were but multiples of himself. Time is too short for those who wish....but for those who love.....remember the 70s band Beautiful Day, Shadow.......
Shadow-I couldn't agree more. I wonder how the hawk would manage if he knew the sands of time. I think his soar would scream of anxiety.love you~rick
this is the end, isn't it? when we cross into the next world this is what it is to exist without a timepiece.
Beautifully done. I'm going to remove my watch and see what happens.
Matter of fact, poignant, beautiful.
This is like a dream!
release...fading...unbound...you paint a good, consistent, cohesive mood with your words. Good poetry.