Friday, December 31, 2010

55 - my soul is bleeding






In these minutes past the hour
of the darkest time of the night,
my soul is weeping
for the dreams discarded,
carelessly flung into the flaming sunset
of a shattered reflection.
And my soul is bleeding
for the trust betrayed,
sullied by the kisses at New Year's turn,
from the one with the poisoned tongue.






every friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man




41 comments:

  1. Time shall heal all wounds, may 2011 bring you peacefilled days ahead. hugs my friend.

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  2. I always try to slip a hand under the shirt to feel skin instead of scales before I deliver a precious kiss.

    Be Well Shadow soon comes the dawn

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  3. Shadow...Each and EVERY word resonates a bleeding heart...sad, but all in all a beautiful piece.

    And, I must say here that I too loved having 'met' your through blogging...you my friend, are a treasure.

    Happy New Year. And may the year bring you everything you've wished for and more.

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  4. Shadow Dancing...
    What a classy way to close out the year, as to have you play again.
    Thank you for your friendship and support, and have a Kick Ass 2011.

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  5. A contemplative piece to see out the year. Thank you for all the pleasure you've given us, here's to more gems in 2011!

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  6. Fiction, I hope. So beautifully captured. "dreams discarded, carelessly flung into the flaming sunset of a shattered reflection" Simply fantastic.

    Mine's up.

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  7. oy...hoping the new year brings healing and hope...

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  8. The lying devil. Dishonesty ruins the trust and that dissolves the relationship. The pain is so real in the writing. I am a testament to healing and life can be even better.

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  9. dark new year's, i like it.

    i love "flung into the flaming sunset".

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  10. What worth would elixir be if you tasted no venom.
    Venom's done and outlasted long. Now, ready your chalice, for a new wine, soft and strong.

    Happy New Year.

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  11. You can't keep a good Scorpio down! A deep 55, Shadow!

    (Happy New Year!)

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  12. i hope it was fiction!!
    nyways i think u r A REALLY STRONG GIRL....

    happy new year girl!! :) may the new year bring a lot of happiness at your door n a beautiful life..

    take care!!

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  13. My heart sinks as I know this pain. I only hope this is fiction! xoxo
    Happy New Year Shadow!!

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  14. Wow. That's one of those so-dark-and-beautiful-you-want-to-sing-it's-praises-but-are-too-busy-trying-to-close-your-mouth type of poems. Fabulous job Shadow.

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  15. As always, beautiful words! Happy new year to you, Shadow.

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  16. Shadow

    Wishing you a very happy new year 2011!
    May this year gives you a lot of reasons to smile!!

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  17. This is a powerful piece, and the ending is gorgeous.

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  18. A cyber hug to you. Hope your 2011 bring hope and love.

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  19. Your poems always fill me with sadness...and my response to that, to you is not to turn away but to open:

    Happy New Year Dear One! May the year to come be rich in blessings for you as you continue to grow in compassion...blending your humanness with your Divine essence...merging, flowing into the ONENESS that we all are.

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  20. May the New Year turn into one full of grace and love and sweetness for you, my dearest Shadow
    :)

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  21. Very sad my friend. May 2011 bring an abundance of new beginnings to you.

    Love and Hugs!!

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  22. Trusting the untrustworthy, what can be learned from this? With pain you produce beauty and we all benefit from your words. Peace will come.

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  23. A haunting tragic poem but beautiful in its execution.

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  24. Hi Shadow :-)

    Happy New Year From Southern California.

    Don't forget to watch the 122nd Rose Parade on New Year's Day coming from Pasadena, California...only 30 miles from The Old Geezer's home :-) If you miss the live telecast, I'm sure there will be lots of reruns through out the day.

    No matter what looms ahead, if you can eat today, enjoy today, mix good cheer with friends today enjoy it and bless God for it. ~Henry Ward Beecher

    May God Bless and Protect You in the Year to Come. ~Ron

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  25. So, so sad! May the new year wipe away the tears.

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  26. Looks like the only way will be up for 2011, compared to your 2010! I do hope so, for your sake. :)

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  27. Shadow, I don't want you to be hurt. I hope that you are okay. Best to you.

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  28. Oh those silver and poison tongued devils.

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  29. Sounds like my week between Christmas and New Year's. Only it was life events and not a single person who makes my soul weep...

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  30. Words of Feelings run so deep.
    Glad I found your blog.

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  31. Happy New Year Shadow! Thanks for stopping by <3

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  32. I have to say that I wasn't ready for the dark ending - but that's just little ole optimist me.

    A Happy New Year.

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  33. Well done 55
    Deceit will do that wont it??

    wishing you the best for 2011

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  34. we do what we can... new year blessings to you and yours :)

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  35. Such brilliant portrayal of Betrayal,
    Baffling yet brilliant..

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  36. "Trust " is the most cherished feeling, it fills us with hope and desires but when it is broken everything is shattered................brought out beautifully.

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