The room is filled with gently flickering candlelight
while entrancing scents waft through the air,
capturing the melodious voices, sparkling with laughter,
enchanted by the music that's caressing their soul.
And its through this haze of shimmering warmth
that I watch you from a distance,
your movements, your lips,
your eyes that dance,
that stir awake a longing,
borne from the touch of long and hot nights
spent at the mercy of your love,
now teasing the edge of my consciousness,
driving a desire to own your flesh once again.
I watch, mesmerized, as your eyes lift, infinitely slow,
before locking my eyes with an intent
running invisible fingers lazily down my spine,
delivering promises, bent of fulfilling,
the need that's written in my eyes...
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all your work is beautiful, but it is awesome to hear that you are enjoying the moment you create to share with us who read
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This positively drips with sensuality. I love it!
ReplyDeleteso much passion! Love this one...the image is perfect too:)
ReplyDeletehappy 2011.
ReplyDeleteit has been a while visiting you.
best wishes.
loved your poetry.
What an awazingly consuming piece filled with raw emotion and passion.
ReplyDeletethe same intimacy i hope 2 one day hav between myself and sum1 else. gr8 job
ReplyDeleteA lot of passion in this one...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I wish you a very good 2011!
ReplyDeleteWhoa, whoa, whoa...is it HOT in here?
ReplyDeleteThere for a while, I didn't think I'd be able to visit with you today, I kept getting "service unavailable" ....whatever the heck that means. LOL
Glad I persisted, I would have missed this excellent piece of work.
Nice and warm, Shadow. I like the warm, joyful poetry.
ReplyDeleteI keep seeing you all about so decided to visit
ReplyDeleteThe longing is profound in this piece as longing usually is.
Nice to meet you
Wow, this has such vivid detail in all the right places.
ReplyDeleteamazing job!
i took a poetry class last semester and found that passionate poetry was the most difficult for me to get down on paper, so major props to you.
Passion, Yes I miss that..:)
ReplyDeleteThat was beautiful, Shadow. Your poetry just keeps getting better and better. The imagery is so stunning and the powerful words are staying strong in my mind. Write on!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Thanks for the comments on my posts lately. I appreciate it a lot! :D
excellent,bravo
ReplyDeleteI'm going to go have a cigarette now.
ReplyDeleteWoweeeee, hot. Nice. Hubby better be ready for what I am thinking now. Wow. Great job, wonderful way to awaken this morning.
ReplyDeleteAnd with each warm breath let out, with every sensual word sending chills down the spine, a heart could skip a beat.
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
nice, sensual poetry!
ReplyDeletebeautifully written
thank you
walking man~ lol!
hummmmmm this is hot invitation to your inner charms my dear... so sweet- and gorgeus. Love your new crave to...
ReplyDeletei'm speechless...this is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you dear Shadow.
warm smiles,
TOTAL CONNECTION.
ReplyDeleteThat's rare. Very rare.
LOVED this piece!
I often wonder if these are about the same lover..
ReplyDeleteDifferent lovers?
Lovers from the past?
Just at the moment I began reading this piece, "Since You Asked", by Judy Collins came on in my headphones.
ReplyDeleteIt made this poignant and sensual piece, even more so.
Shadow, I am glad you are posting more regularly now. Very passionate post. Blessings to you dear one.
ReplyDeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a passionate and layered piece. I love the "edges of consciousness" and "invisible". You have a unique way of tying up your work with great endings. I always had too much trouble with that! The image is perfect for it...I can almost hear the background music as well!
ReplyDeleteohhh,,,,, i could be there, i could be this lucky one observed by you ;)
ReplyDeletewonderful work ,
Wow, that's what I call irresistible!
ReplyDeletePS...you don't have to add this comment, but I wanted to thank you for YOUR comment this morning. Coming from you, with your writing talent, I am honored!!
ReplyDelete:o)
...ah, but is it in vain?
ReplyDeleteYou paint a picture with words that can either thrill to the fingertips or cut like a knife. What a talent!!
ReplyDeletehugs
Sandi
sensual and beautiful. very well written poem. keep writing and happy new year.
ReplyDelete(((((Shadow)))))
ReplyDeleteWOW! i luv the picture too.
ReplyDeletewOW, WHAT CAN I SAY, PERFECT POETRY WITH PICTURES PERFECTLY MATCHED. YOU INSPIRED ME.
ReplyDeletei loved the picture! serene..
ReplyDeleteBeautifully described the meeting of two souls. Just perfect!!
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