Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Hidden consciousness






Tears overflow from dreams into wakefulness

as the past and the present

intertwine to form

a consciousness which

until now was locked

in the hidden chambers of my mind.


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45 comments:

  1. Cindy June 15, 2011 at 11:44:00 AM GMT+2

    Beautiful, so so true. have a great day

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  2. the walking manJune 15, 2011 at 12:58:00 PM GMT+2

    what was hidden is now open, release it.

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  3. Brian MillerJune 15, 2011 at 1:21:00 PM GMT+2

    ah but you are better for having all the pieces now...

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  4. rivercatJune 15, 2011 at 1:38:00 PM GMT+2

    I like the sense of positive self awareness. They fade becoming part of us in a growth process.
    Beautiful poem and thought
    xo

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  5. steveroniJune 15, 2011 at 1:50:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow, I hope all 700+ followers are reading this post.

    Glad I am one of them!
    How pertinent!

    PEACE!

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  6. AnonymousJune 15, 2011 at 1:59:00 PM GMT+2

    A great rhythym to this one. Good stuff, Shadow :)

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  7. UnknownJune 15, 2011 at 2:07:00 PM GMT+2

    I so love the way your mind works.

    In truth there is beauty - and this is beautiful.

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  8. Poetic ArtistJune 15, 2011 at 2:57:00 PM GMT+2

    So true..To be that is called true peace.
    Katelen

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  9. Blasphemous AestheteJune 15, 2011 at 3:43:00 PM GMT+2

    And I thought that those who have tough realities have beautiful dreams. But its the tears infiltrating from dreams to reality.

    Nice lines.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. laughingwolfJune 15, 2011 at 4:16:00 PM GMT+2

    nasty things, those minds...

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  11. Hootin AnniJune 15, 2011 at 4:19:00 PM GMT+2

    Oh my goodness...this is so eerie for me. I just woke up early this morning with a dream stuck so vividly in my mind that I had to come to the computer and write down my memory of it. I swear girl, you should have ALL your work published in book form....I'd buy it. Or maybe you could send me one hot of the press?!!!

    Glad to see you come over to visit with me my friend. How goes it? Still working with your drums?

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  12. Enchanted OakJune 15, 2011 at 5:17:00 PM GMT+2

    You're a dreamweaver.

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  13. Monkey ManJune 15, 2011 at 10:54:00 PM GMT+2

    unlocking that stuffed and held back releases and frees.

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  14. UnknownJune 16, 2011 at 12:47:00 AM GMT+2

    and I am certified in the tenderness of your soul's embrace.......

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  15. AnonymousJune 16, 2011 at 1:35:00 AM GMT+2

    The hardest kind of epiphany.

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  16. ScarletJune 16, 2011 at 1:42:00 AM GMT+2

    Lovely post ~

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  17. simonJune 16, 2011 at 7:41:00 AM GMT+2

    ouch.

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  18. Dave KingJune 16, 2011 at 10:28:00 AM GMT+2

    I found that moving. I recently tried to write a poem on much the same subject, but put too much into it. Paring it down to the essentials has paid dividends. Well done.

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  19. SaumyaJune 16, 2011 at 5:57:00 PM GMT+2

    WOW! This is incredible because it's succinct yet says so much.

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  20. steveroniJune 16, 2011 at 7:52:00 PM GMT+2

    "Consciousness", one of my all-time favorite words. It may hold the (ahem) meaning of life's non-secrets.

    And Shadow--YOU are a great "picture-picker" --grin!

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  21. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 1:21:00 AM GMT+2

    to dream or not to dream, that is the question.

    but with you, i would choose to dream...

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  22. moondustwriterJune 17, 2011 at 7:00:00 AM GMT+2

    mmm that one really does transcend the present and the past

    Hi Shadow hope all is well..

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  23. UnknownJune 17, 2011 at 4:26:00 PM GMT+2

    Lovely as are you...thank you for you comment on my post and so glad to be back...namaste.

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  24. G-ManJune 17, 2011 at 4:55:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow Dancing...
    It's so cool to see you back.
    Always awesome my Friend...G

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  25. Tabitha.MontgomeryJune 18, 2011 at 12:11:00 AM GMT+2

    It's hidden for good reasons.
    Your job is to figure out why ;)
    xo

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  26. MeghaJune 18, 2011 at 8:32:00 AM GMT+2

    u talk a lot in a few words....

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  27. UnderTheSameSkyJune 19, 2011 at 6:41:00 AM GMT+2

    walking on a thin line between dreams and reality. I've written something about that some time ago. good work.

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  28. CiCiJune 19, 2011 at 5:15:00 PM GMT+2

    To bring the past into the present on a conscious level can be a dangerous move. Be ready for an inner struggle.

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  29. The AspirantJune 19, 2011 at 10:04:00 PM GMT+2

    nicely said :)

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  30. LauraJune 22, 2011 at 12:51:00 AM GMT+2

    such beauty in this poem...if feels healing to me.

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  31. Cassiopeia RisesJune 22, 2011 at 5:06:00 PM GMT+2

    Lovely, just beautiful work.



    Melanie

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  32. Susie HemingwayJune 24, 2011 at 10:59:00 AM GMT+2

    Ah so true - with beauty.

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  33. Dave KingJune 24, 2011 at 4:12:00 PM GMT+2

    Intriguing, the image that accompanies this one. I haven't quite worked out the symbolism yet. I'll get there in the end, though!

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  34. Rosaria WilliamsJune 24, 2011 at 5:06:00 PM GMT+2

    You're weaving some magic here. Thanks for your visit.

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  35. TrishJune 25, 2011 at 2:01:00 AM GMT+2

    As always, wonderfully thought-provoking!

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  36. best website hostingJune 25, 2011 at 8:50:00 AM GMT+2

    I agree with you. Beautiful poem man. I like your words very much.

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  37. LarryGJune 27, 2011 at 12:41:00 AM GMT+2

    Hi Shadow,
    Glad to read on your blog,
    it's been a bit.
    hugs to y'all...
    LarryG

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  38. classicsJune 28, 2011 at 12:46:00 PM GMT+2

    So beautiful poem. I like it

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  39. TrishJuly 2, 2011 at 1:33:00 AM GMT+2

    Another beauty!

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  40. JinksyJuly 3, 2011 at 9:01:00 PM GMT+2

    Sounds like you could do with popping over for a dose of Jinksy happy pills, and a big hug! ♥

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  41. SydJuly 6, 2011 at 3:58:00 AM GMT+2

    Hope that you are doing well Shadow. The unlocking of those feelings is so important. Let the tears flow. And then keep moving forward.

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  42. EvaJuly 9, 2011 at 6:32:00 AM GMT+2

    Sometimes we wish to keep those things locked away. It is a fearful day to face them.

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  43. Light and VoicesJuly 24, 2011 at 11:29:00 PM GMT+2

    I think you are exploring layers. Very nice.
    Joyce M

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  44. RickJuly 29, 2011 at 7:09:00 AM GMT+2

    yes, shads
    a bittersweet awakening is better than denial
    rick

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  45. UnknownSeptember 4, 2011 at 3:42:00 PM GMT+2

    I use to think my secret conscience knows the answers to my most frightful questions...but I trust in its will to find what is the best for me... Thanks for sharing, have a nice day

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