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Please forgive my impure thoughts, disloyalties and
transgressions. Forgive my silent anger,
my impatience and stubbornness; forgive me for being selfish, unsupportive and
unreasonable, for my arrogance and pride... forgive me for being callous. I ask you forgive me my lack of faith, and please give
him back his life...
ugh, that last line...so sorry...as if something we might have done might have caused it.....felt...
ReplyDelete"I forgive you for being human...SO HUMAN --as that is how I made you. Welcome into this place I have kept for you, Dear Verena".
ReplyDeleteHugs and Blessings!
God
(I didn't make this up--it just sort of wrote itself. Know what I mean, Jelly Bean?)
P.S. OK, you've waited for this surprise:
ReplyDelete"Here is your Tweetie-bird, HAPPY to be reunited with "Mommie"...
PEACE!
Don't we all have these thoughts once in a while?
ReplyDeleteLovely to read you again ~
Everything you write is jaw-dropping.
ReplyDeleteThe ending blew me away. Wow. Just... wow. This does a perfect job of redirection; guiding the reader along a familiar track of thought and reason so that they assume they know were the train is going, and then in one dynamite blow you change everything by blowing the bridge out. Fantastic work, Shadow.
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