How I wish I were a gypsy, travelling through this big old land,
without future to direct me, without past to hold my hand,
free to wander dusty sideways, with the wind as my best friend,
sharing fruits in shady orchards, whilst the stranger's ear I lend.
I'd return the gift of nectar, as I see unspoken dreams
dance behind the shaded eyes, a desire that there gleams,
for a freedom never tasted, for a touch before unfelt,
and bewitched he settles back, for the hand this day had dealt.
He now listens to the words, as they flow forth from my lips,
possibilities arise, as he deviates from scripts
written by the hands of others and from blinkered visions old,
meant to tie him to the known, that would keep him in the mould.
Although brief the hours spent, in my time and in my care,
he discovers magic sights in the softness of my stare,
'ere returning to his life, 'ere I further wander through
dusty sideways in this land, for the next dream to renew.
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The wind being my best friend. And unspoken dreams...okay, I love this! Does this surprise you? Not in the least, I'm sure. I always enjoy your work, your thoughts, your creative mind...and you KNOW IT!
ReplyDeleteSHADOW, you 'bad' gypsy-girl, breaking hearts all over the land, always one more door away from heaven
ReplyDeleteMaybe there will show 'that' man who will one day say to you:
"Gypsy-girl..F'k the world and the boring, and the same, same, same. I join you. Let's make some dust, girl"
LOVE your work, Shadow, and.....
Oh well, PEACE!
Ah yes, the life of a true gypsy. You write in such a way that the old romantic slant of a gypsy is more than just that. Lovely post today. Meeting in minds and spirit the people we come across as we travel this life is a special one for me.
ReplyDeleteThere is a certain mystical quality to gypsies... perhaps it's freedom, that unknown quality, embracing impermanence by constantly moving with it. Who knows. I wish I could just stop all the petty things that occupy me and be free.
ReplyDeleteLovely writing by the way. :)
may those dreams find you...i wanna be a gypsy too...
ReplyDeleteLiving in the moment, what more could one ask...(Hugs)Indigo
ReplyDeleteWe all want to be gypsies! What beautiful words you have written here, Shadow.
ReplyDeleteI too, long for such a dream.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
Really beautiful lines. A very nice thought of being a gypsy and being free, like the wind.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
i love thiss. "the wind being my best friend" especially
ReplyDeleteOkay, how did you get that picture of me??? ;-)
ReplyDeleteLove your poem about freedom and blowing around like a dandelion seed.
I love the romantic ideals of this piece! I really felt transported by it.
ReplyDeletelets go.... I could do this with you.
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed very well the deep yearning within most of us- of a gypsy hiding within us!
ReplyDeletebeautiful thoughts...such freedom in stepping outside of the box of expectations...discovering our own way...listening to our inner compass.
ReplyDeleteI love how differently you look at things, how magical this sounds.
ReplyDeleteA true poetess. I love that this is in iambic pentameter, my favorite meter.
ReplyDeleteI do not know why I always think of the wizard of oz when I think the word gypsy. I guess because of the scene with the fortune teller. Great post Shadow. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love this, Shadow!
ReplyDeleteMy Gyspsy blood (the Zinga side of the family) loves this post. But the staid German side fears it.
ReplyDeleteIt's such a romantic way of life or used to be. A much slower pace, no responsibilities, not worrying about tomorrow. I'll buy that. Love your poem.
ReplyDeleteyou make it all so magic and tempting ;)
ReplyDeletebeautiful ....
nice. i adore 'formal' poetry and you certainly nailed this one.
ReplyDeleteLove the poem, sounds like freedom
ReplyDeleteYou are so talented! A trully beautiful post!
ReplyDeleteSongs can take you back into time, I've heard that before.
ReplyDeleteToday, I experienced the same thing happening as I read through that poem... it took me back to my childhood days, when I used to read all those Enid Blytons, (specifically Famous Fives), and dreaming about the wonderful free life that the gypsies in those stories had.
Inspiring.
Cheers,
Joy...
Ahh to be a gypsy and dance in the dust
ReplyDeleteHe's better off for even a brief interlude but ...
Outstanding and mysterious
I see the attraction, but I wouldn't be adventurous enough... once, maybe!
ReplyDeleteWandering to be found. I can relate to that.
ReplyDeleteMe too, Shadow!
ReplyDeleteamazing work your words flow flawlessly
ReplyDeleteI do so agree about imperfections being the unique point from which beauty emanates! Thanks for you comment this morning:)
ReplyDeleteah, here in your writing is the gypsy.
ReplyDeletethanks for your comments..
Dianne
this is so touching and beautifully expressed!
ReplyDeletea true gypsy, indeed!
beautiful, shadow. I love "deviating from scripts." We get too tied down, don't we?
ReplyDeleteI'd give it a try... but sure you'd be in your sportscar, not in that cart?
ReplyDeleteguess it's just another dream about to succeed if only we did not have so much to lose(?)
The life of a gyspsy is not all it seems to be, Of course what life is?
ReplyDeletei enjoyed this ... it's uniform-form and pace ... and formalities ... nice!
ReplyDeleteas to Gypsy-ness, a notion that is near an dear to me (both figuratively and factually) - it can be fraught, both with whimsy and dread ... there's a price for everything except perhaps for dreaming ... (as in reading or writing poetry) ...
may the next one arrive soon
noxy
(btw, my word verification is 'phypolde' ... what a word, eh? ha ha)
beautifully written, shadow, beautifully! and you know, it - the life of the gypsy - the love of gypsy - is yours for the taking - just take it - own it - be it! BE the gypsy! ;)
ReplyDeleteand dear shadow, thank you SO much for your kind comments at my blog -
ReplyDeleteYour gypsy took me for a pleasant ride; pleasant because I love metered, rhyming poems, yet find so very few.
ReplyDeleteI am the gypsy of my mind.
ReplyDeleteThough, I expect the be a major
"Gypset" ...any time.
Jet + Gypsy = Rich-Happy-Hippie
Cheers!
I think more and more about the nomadic life of sailing from port to port. I think though that I am grounded to the land as well. But sometimes I think that just sailing away would be nice.
ReplyDeleteThis was very good, Shadow. I wonder if you know how much you've grown as a poet in the past year. I wouldn't know my iambs from my meters these days, so far from those college years, but your rhythm and phrasing are mature and your endline is very strong.
ReplyDeleteShadow Dancing...
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightfully upbeat piece of work from you!
I Loved it...Thanks
Romanticism at it's best. I love it.
ReplyDeletehey nice attempt.specially it can be read rythamically.
ReplyDeletei like the second lne very much :)
almost like: ashes to ashes, dust to dust... but with hope
ReplyDeleteHa!
ReplyDeleteDulce's comment made me laugh
I too remembered your post of tossin the keys in the sportscar along with your luggage.
but really, you're far too sensible for such gypsy nonsense.
~rick
I do love this one. The joy of being gypsy.
ReplyDeleteA gypsy is all I ever wanted to be. I read a book many years ago and the name of the girl was Alexa Victoria...that's what I named my daughter.
ReplyDeleteGypsys know a thing or two...
Wish I were too, living a life full of excitement and bold adventures.
ReplyDeleteI've just been lookinng at a Valentine weekend in one of these, but couldn't persuade Doreen!
ReplyDeleteHello friend, just wanted to drop in and say thank you for your many visits and thoughtful comments. Wishing you wellness and peace from a distant place on this same planet we share:)
ReplyDeletethis is for sure, a good poem to read. i'd glad i came by to visit...i often think of my poems as dreams.
ReplyDeleteNIce! Tremendous imagination. You want to steal way from the world- nicely revealed.
ReplyDeleteand here is for the lovely gypsy:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lwSTf_sekv4
how are you today?
Sometimes we all would have the feeling of travel around like people did in the past.
ReplyDeleteA World without frontiers...
Greetings from
Norway
Splendido.
ReplyDeletex
God herself said it was OK now Shadow (I'm pretty sure it was her, the voices are either God or the Devil) so either way I figure you're covered, it will either be the right thing to do, or a whole lot of fun
ReplyDeleteand there's the sign from God telling me it was the Devil, the verify is shtholy
me loves! beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI've always desired to be a backpacker. Just travelling places without knowing what my next destination would be. Without caring what is in store for me.May be someday this does come true and hope it is really soon.
ReplyDeletelove the carefree and fun post ~
ReplyDeleteThis touches me a lot. Your words have feeling.
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