Deep was the voice that rumbled
with the silver-gray sheet
that swathed the skies in an instant.
The words, an abrupt chill
that sunk into every essence within its reach.
Shoulders drooped with the tail of every creature
as the meaning absorbed into their soul,
and regrets danced their last dance
on empty, deserted stages,
unworthy of thought and awareness...
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dang...i def dont want that regret...come that day...
ReplyDeleteThis is powerful and very thought provoking...
ReplyDelete'all the world's a stage...'
ReplyDeleteA great amount of truth in this piece, Shadow. This means something particular to me...excellently written. :))
ReplyDeletePainfully powerful.
ReplyDeleteHi Shadow!
ReplyDeleteodd your piece here today speaking of that last dance - i just wrote a piece this morning while i was out sitting in the sunshine on that "dance" - beautifully done, lady!
ReplyDeleteInteresting powerful Shadow. Regret can be a silent killer. Blessings.
ReplyDeleteI love that silver-gray sheet swathing the skies...
ReplyDeleteWell- if the show lasts but an instant and only one is there to see it, then it's been worth it.
Powerful, as always!
ReplyDeleteOooh, that is some deep regret! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteTouched my heart!
ReplyDeleteregret is like thunder...it sneaks up suddenly with a terrifying realization, that somethings cannot be undone. Powerful words Shadow.
ReplyDeleteA beautifully written and very deep piece.Brilliant as ever.
ReplyDeleteWaiting impatiently for the next one!
ReplyDeletethis poem of yours is so profound
ReplyDeleteand authentic - with an atmosphere
of disquiet.
I am speechless - your blog which I just found moves me. Your new follower who hungers for more
ReplyDeleteHelen Tilston
I am back blogging.
ReplyDeleteHauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove the drooping shoulders and the curve of the piano stage in the image...
ReplyDeleteYou always manage to stun me.
ReplyDeleteSandi
while adjunct giggles crept past in the shadow's.....heh heh heh.........
ReplyDeleteThis is rare- beautifully written! xo
ReplyDeleteI'm a little bit in awe of this piece, Shadow...it's powerful, written beautifully. :)
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