come, take my hand
let me lead you astray
forget all these paths
in this vast array
spread out before you
come, trust in me
i will not coerce you
please come with, freely
come, see the sights
i see through my eyes
let it flow through you
like a fresh new moonrise
and dispel all your fears
come, trust in me
let go of the chains
it’s a burden, heavy
and should we get lost
in this colourful maze
that i have espied
through gilded doorways
we’ll revel enchanted
in sweet air bubbly
why don’t we try it
come, let’s go see?
let me lead you astray
forget all these paths
in this vast array
spread out before you
come, trust in me
i will not coerce you
please come with, freely
come, see the sights
i see through my eyes
let it flow through you
like a fresh new moonrise
and dispel all your fears
come, trust in me
let go of the chains
it’s a burden, heavy
and should we get lost
in this colourful maze
that i have espied
through gilded doorways
we’ll revel enchanted
in sweet air bubbly
why don’t we try it
come, let’s go see?
Oh, yes!..Let's go...Beautiful poem!:)
ReplyDeleteI have followed you...
ReplyDeleteI have trusted you...
I have enjoyed your mind...
Your thoughts, your emotions....
You, dear Shadow, can be inspirational in all walks!!
Whimsical, lovely, and precious!
ReplyDeleteThe image is also those things...
~Calli
An irresistable invitation!
ReplyDeleteI feel blessed having read that. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteOn my way!
ReplyDeleteI would like to go see today. Instead I'm stuck in the office only looking out at the water.
ReplyDeleteMakes we want to grab my sweetie, and go!
ReplyDeleteI like it, you're a bit "lighter" today.
Shadow-that read so lovely, like a musical fairy tale. a trip to a special wonderland. I love when you're feeling like this. great pic, also! ~rick
ReplyDeleteI am there, wonderful poem, one my favorites!!!
ReplyDeleteI would if I met you probably follow you quite freely, given your enchanting spell with words!
ReplyDeleteG:-)
awww Shadow.........in a New York second. This is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteso mesmerizing. very nice. how do you do it everyday...you need to publish these in a book...you have a great talent.
ReplyDeletehugs, mile
I'm ready also. Let's go! WAIT...let me get my GPS...
ReplyDeleteThis is just magical!
ReplyDeleteOH MY GOODNESS! I have goosebumps...seriously.
ReplyDeleteBreath takingly beautiful.. I hold out my hand to YOU and walk that path.. SMILES
ReplyDeleteooh, I love this...the picture with it is so fitting too!! Good one!
ReplyDeleteok ;)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely invitation. I'm game.
ReplyDeleteI'd go with you anywhere.
ReplyDeleteAll the paths with you seem bright and beautiful, it is a constant discovering of wonders.
All the best.
Beautiful lines here Shadow! Keep writing!!!
ReplyDeleteHow could anyone not be seduced
ReplyDeleteby this inspriational poem -
the poem offers hope and peace.
What a delightful invitation! How could I refuse.... come spirit me away..
ReplyDeleteBlessings, Star
Falling in love, Shadow, taking a risk...this is what these words leave me with. I love this one! Fabulous!
ReplyDeleteThe picture matches perfectly too, the path...how cool :D
xox
yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, and again, i say, YES...
ReplyDeletelead on, M'Lady... I'll perchance to see...
ReplyDeleteSWEET STUFF!
I trust you, which ever direction we go. Let's just go!
ReplyDeleteIn the worlds seen in the mind we find a road to reality.
ReplyDeleteYes, you would take any one of us somewhere special. I don't think anyone of us doubts that. You've a magic about you Shadow. Hold onto that.
ReplyDeleteIll go there with you shadow!
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