Friday, December 4, 2009

55 - the aura of love








with these eyes i plainly see
words you choose to hide from me
as i feel waves roll from your heart
when emotions through you dart
and my cheeks feel wet with tears
when you’re faced with dark frontiers
so rest yourself in my aura of love
and soak in the soothing light from above






every friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man





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51 comments:

  1. Just Be RealDecember 4, 2009 at 1:25:00 PM GMT+2

    So very peaceful. I want to rest in His love to desperately. Thank you Shadow. Very timely, very timely and beautiful!!

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  2. FireblossomDecember 4, 2009 at 1:36:00 PM GMT+2

    Sounds like a marvelous invitation!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 2:13:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful as always - Great words. Great flow.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 2:34:00 PM GMT+2

    a wonderful invite, I a glad who loves the sea, the sound of the waves, feel this magnetic energy from this write.. GREAT WRITING


    Wishing you a wonderful weekend of fun and laughter.. HUGS

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  5. Hootin AnniDecember 4, 2009 at 2:44:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow....this one made tears well....it's tender, loving and I felt comfort in your words today.

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  6. FelicitasDecember 4, 2009 at 2:56:00 PM GMT+2

    Now this is what love should be! Beautiful 55, Shadow!

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  7. LouDecember 4, 2009 at 3:12:00 PM GMT+2

    So hopeful, so soothing. Just what I needed today..

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  8. SharoninWonderlandDecember 4, 2009 at 3:15:00 PM GMT+2

    I have given you an award!

    Check it out below!!

    http://sharoninwonderland.blogspot.com/2009/12/blog-post_04.html

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  9. the walking manDecember 4, 2009 at 3:49:00 PM GMT+2

    Save me a spot I ain't done doing what needs be done yet.

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  10. Sandi McBrideDecember 4, 2009 at 3:58:00 PM GMT+2

    I wish your Shadow persona could be joyful...
    Sandi

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  11. LiamDecember 4, 2009 at 4:02:00 PM GMT+2

    I think you could become a billionaire writing cards for Lovers.

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  12. CiCiDecember 4, 2009 at 4:04:00 PM GMT+2

    My hubby had bipolar disorder and is on very strong meds, so I live this way as I watch his emotions and I am so glad I am here for him. This is lovely, warm, caring, observant, very good post. Hugs!

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  13. CalliDecember 4, 2009 at 4:07:00 PM GMT+2

    So, so beautiful. Uplifting. and the title is perfect!

    Have a great weekend, Shadow~
    Calli xo

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  14. Tall KayDecember 4, 2009 at 4:08:00 PM GMT+2

    Basking in the Sunlight of the Spirit...very moving 55! Happy Friday my friend.

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  15. Tom BaileyDecember 4, 2009 at 4:08:00 PM GMT+2

    You could put music with many of the things you write. I thought about that as I read some of your archived material that there could be songs there.

    I am sorry if that was obvious and I missed it.


    Kindest regards,
    Tom Bailey

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  16. UnknownDecember 4, 2009 at 4:13:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautifully done, Shadow. It's what she does for me - what you do for him. I imagine that this has always described the epitome of the relationship between man and woman - no matter if that man came from from the hunt with a spear in his hand, to the comforts of the cave or if he came home from the office, parked the Mercedes and opened the door to their mansion.

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  17. clean and crazyDecember 4, 2009 at 4:19:00 PM GMT+2

    beautiful, absolutely beautiful, such a treat to read as usual. mine is up too

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  18. DebDecember 4, 2009 at 4:34:00 PM GMT+2

    Such a mixture of happiness and sadness. Loved this. :)

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  19. JessieDecember 4, 2009 at 4:39:00 PM GMT+2

    peaceful and beautiful, a wonderful way to start the weekend!

    smiles,

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  20. Dulçe ♥December 4, 2009 at 4:41:00 PM GMT+2

    oh MY! You beautiful woman of beautiful words... your love aura invades me so sweetly...

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  21. DianneDecember 4, 2009 at 4:41:00 PM GMT+2

    whew
    I felt that one to my core.
    I'll take it to heart, and soak in the soothing light from above, yesterday I needed it in particular.
    55 and rhyme, you are a quick one!
    Thanks

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  22. g-manDecember 4, 2009 at 5:04:00 PM GMT+2

    You are total Love Shadow Dancing!
    Wallowing in your Aura would be Heaven!
    Perfect 55..
    Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

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  23. MichaelDecember 4, 2009 at 5:35:00 PM GMT+2

    I have re-entered the world of blogdom again and your poem just sums up the peace I feel when out of body, good to see you in fbook as well

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  24. Enchanted OakDecember 4, 2009 at 5:48:00 PM GMT+2

    Very loving and lovely.
    You wrote to me about sliding into the holiday blues, and I hear music here.

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  25. Caio FernDecember 4, 2009 at 5:49:00 PM GMT+2

    wonderful . among of al these words i felt a shell of love . i want t rest my feeling in it .

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  26. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 6:06:00 PM GMT+2

    With eyes closed we can see some things clearly.

    Secretia

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  27. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 6:22:00 PM GMT+2

    Its all going to be ok....


    *sighs*

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  28. Brian MillerDecember 4, 2009 at 8:13:00 PM GMT+2

    wonderful 55...very timely in my life as well. have a great weekend.

    mine is up!

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  29. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 8:20:00 PM GMT+2

    It makes me wish I could be with the real person I love

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  30. KayDecember 4, 2009 at 8:35:00 PM GMT+2

    ooohhhh... i love this.... *pause for girlie sigh*

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  31. SydDecember 4, 2009 at 9:24:00 PM GMT+2

    Nice Shadow. I like the sea imagery.

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  32. AnonymousDecember 4, 2009 at 9:28:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow, dear Shadow... your words often soothe my spirit, taking me to serene places. Marvelous 55!!!

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  33. Stacey J. WarnerDecember 4, 2009 at 10:08:00 PM GMT+2

    fantastic! truly beautiful...nothing better than basking in another's aura of love...

    much love

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  34. Nevine SultanDecember 5, 2009 at 12:37:00 AM GMT+2

    A familiar landscape, drawn out with beautiful words. Another very nice 55, Shadow!

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  35. AnonymousDecember 5, 2009 at 2:22:00 AM GMT+2

    A precious perception.

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  36. One Prayer GirlDecember 5, 2009 at 2:54:00 AM GMT+2

    You must know already that I love this 55. I'm a huge fan of your words.

    PG

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  37. Tabitha.MontgomeryDecember 5, 2009 at 8:11:00 AM GMT+2

    Beautiful.
    xo

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  38. Mariana SofferDecember 5, 2009 at 2:26:00 PM GMT+2

    So comforting, so soothing, beautifull words.
    Thanks friend

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  39. Eaton Bennett aka Berenice AlbrechtDecember 5, 2009 at 2:56:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful..."words you choose to hide from me..." I can relate to these words very strongly. :)

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  40. TorAaDecember 5, 2009 at 3:52:00 PM GMT+2

    You express so wonderful

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  41. catvibeDecember 5, 2009 at 4:23:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful!

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  42. AndreaDecember 5, 2009 at 4:42:00 PM GMT+2

    You have an award on arise 2 write.
    andrea

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  43. Chandrika ShubhamDecember 5, 2009 at 4:44:00 PM GMT+2

    Lovely!

    Best wishes.

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  44. UnknownDecember 5, 2009 at 6:09:00 PM GMT+2

    So I'm a bit late to this one, but wow, this is so amazingly loving and comforting...thank you!

    Love
    g

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  45. The Oceanside AnimalsDecember 5, 2009 at 11:27:00 PM GMT+2

    Deal.

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  46. Woman in a WindowDecember 6, 2009 at 5:33:00 AM GMT+2

    love that gives and takes. we can keep one another safe like that.
    xo
    erin

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  47. Dave KingDecember 6, 2009 at 4:04:00 PM GMT+2

    Yearning is a much under-rated emotion.

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  48. Rosaria WilliamsDecember 6, 2009 at 7:14:00 PM GMT+2

    Beautiful. Serene. Tender. Inviting.

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  49. Maude LynnDecember 7, 2009 at 3:57:00 AM GMT+2

    This is gorgeous!

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  50. laughingwolfDecember 8, 2009 at 3:40:00 AM GMT+2

    oh yeah... nothing like a rest....

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  51. TERI REES WANGDecember 8, 2009 at 7:02:00 PM GMT+2

    I think this one we could each be claiming and repeating to our Self.

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