Tuesday, September 13, 2011

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To feel the intent of a nurturing glance,
to bask in the sunlit moon,
when water transforms to the nectar of chance,
and time builds a palace from ruins.


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28 comments:

  1. Caio FernSeptember 13, 2011 at 2:13:00 PM GMT+2

    beautiful. really.

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  2. Brian MillerSeptember 13, 2011 at 2:59:00 PM GMT+2

    peaceful and hopefilled...

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  3. SaumyaSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:53:00 PM GMT+2

    Love it, especially the part about water becoming nectar.

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  4. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 13, 2011 at 6:38:00 PM GMT+2

    BEAUTIFUL prose!

    I wish to use these lines (of course with reference to you).


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. Dulçe ♥September 13, 2011 at 10:26:00 PM GMT+2

    hmmm it makes me want to have a nap in that water. How could that be!!!??
    Love the last line, oh I do!

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  6. Monkey ManSeptember 14, 2011 at 12:13:00 AM GMT+2

    This is calm and full of the breath of life.

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  7. OpaqueSeptember 14, 2011 at 11:20:00 AM GMT+2

    YOu say so much by saying so little!

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  8. ♥●• İzdihër •●♥September 14, 2011 at 2:57:00 PM GMT+2

    So beautiful and lovely blog .My visit and I am so impressed.Visit me too.

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  9. G-ManSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:46:00 PM GMT+2

    Shadow Dancing...

    We love the Short and Sweet!

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  10. CiCiSeptember 14, 2011 at 10:21:00 PM GMT+2

    There aren't many nurturing glances in life these days. Well, there are in my life thank goodness. I live in fear of the nectar of chance. I am cowardly but I like that you write such wonderful words.

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  11. LauraSeptember 14, 2011 at 11:24:00 PM GMT+2

    I love this...pure delightful essence.

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  12. DrizelSeptember 15, 2011 at 11:40:00 AM GMT+2

    palace from ruins, such lovely imagery. Stunning piece:)

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  13. MeghaSeptember 16, 2011 at 4:47:00 PM GMT+2

    amazing lines!!
    like falling in luv yet again or enjoying the day after an eclipsed night :) just luved it :)
    god bless!!

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  14. PseudoSeptember 17, 2011 at 7:52:00 AM GMT+2

    Ah, what I have been working towards, the palace from ruins.

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  15. A.S.September 17, 2011 at 5:12:00 PM GMT+2

    Senti um olhar de carinho nas tuas palavras...talvez sinta a lua ser aquecida pelo sol!...


    Beijos,
    AL

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  16. PunamSeptember 17, 2011 at 5:44:00 PM GMT+2

    time builds a palace from ruins...

    I wish i wish i wishhhhhhh!!!!

    Beautiful lines.. well written!

    Punam
    http://punamjr.wordpress.com

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  17. steveroniSeptember 18, 2011 at 5:48:00 AM GMT+2

    WHEW! F I N A L L Y I made it here in time (before the next gold nugget).

    Daily I wonder--chances of who or what is waiting right around the corner--and what engaging story, or one needing help, or another piece of my own puzzled history will emerge...

    Shadow, you arrange words to tell complete stories.
    "...Time builds a palace from ruins." This happens so many times during my observations.
    Thank You

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  18. Just Be RealSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:26:00 PM GMT+2

    Short and direct and makes sense to me. I have learned on my journey that I gravitate to being nurtured. Blessings dear one.

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  19. Douglas EvansSeptember 20, 2011 at 4:58:00 AM GMT+2

    This is really good stuff.

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  20. moondustwriterSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:48:00 PM GMT+2

    time builds a palace from ruins... ( I could dwell on that thought for hours)

    Dear poet friend you always make words do your bidding

    hope all is well

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  21. laughingwolfSeptember 24, 2011 at 7:49:00 PM GMT+2

    wow!

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  22. Eaton Bennett aka Berenice AlbrechtSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:43:00 PM GMT+2

    I chose the just the right day to visit...such hope in your thoughts, lovely! :))

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  23. trishOctober 2, 2011 at 5:10:00 AM GMT+2

    filled with hope. Love it!

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  24. BuddhiHermitOctober 2, 2011 at 3:38:00 PM GMT+2

    Brief, and beautiful.
    Thank You.

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  25. Preeti S.October 2, 2011 at 5:33:00 PM GMT+2

    Brilliant. Succint with the feeling of peace and eternity as one goes through this poem.

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  26. TrishOctober 4, 2011 at 7:13:00 AM GMT+2

    And the next one....??!

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  27. SydOctober 4, 2011 at 8:46:00 PM GMT+2

    Time building a palace from ruins--I like that. Hard to resurrect the past so cunningly in reality.

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  28. AnonymousNovember 16, 2011 at 5:16:00 AM GMT+2

    Vulnerable in its eagerness.
    I feel this way sometimes.

    Love it!

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