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Darkness stole the daylight
and the wind tore through my soul
on the day I fell in love with you.
A shiver of your threat,
discarded, your design,
you ravaged and raged
to the rhythm of the moon,
you drew me to your core,
made a slave out of me,
I am drawn to this storm, here I feed.
The emotions, love , mistrust all have such a binding spell that it keeps us bound to that from which we want to be free. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYou need to get on a better diet, girl! (LOL?)
ReplyDeleteThat first stanza is some of the most beautiful writing I have read in a while. You are amazing.
ReplyDeleteFeel so sad ~ no lady has said anything like that to me for ages . . . . sob sob!
ReplyDeleteLovely bit of writing, Shadow . . . :) x
Okay this would really miff me off.
ReplyDeleteDarkness stole the daylight
ReplyDeleteand the wind tore through my soul
on the day I fell in love with you.
This is powerful. Strong, heartfelt ... known by so many souls. Lovely, just lovely.
A storm worth living through to be sure!!!!
ReplyDeleteStormy relationships can be the strongest. A powerful piece indeed.
ReplyDeleteLove, in general is highly over rated. Wind on the other hand carry's much of the best and worst away.
ReplyDeleteWords as powerful as the image, and no mistake...
ReplyDeleteWow!!
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