Monday, October 5, 2015

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I want you bare. Every inch of you bare before me.
I want to see your pulse racing in the vein along your neck
and I want to hear your ragged breath calling my name.
 I want to know the words to the pictures that play off in your eyes
when you open long locked doors to let me in, just a little bit.
I want to seek every adventure that you dream about, day and night,
and I want to fall into the waves with you, like you did when you were nine.
 I want your naked body, every inch alongside mine,
and I need your naked soul, so I can fall and let go of the line.




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9 comments:

  1. Dr. Vandana SharmaOctober 5, 2015 at 8:03:00 PM GMT+2

    Sensuous...............

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  2. J.H. MoncrieffOctober 6, 2015 at 6:26:00 AM GMT+2

    ...and yet, creepy at the same time.

    I love your blog! It looks amazing.

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  3. Blue GrumpsterOctober 6, 2015 at 10:57:00 PM GMT+2

    You're the real deal. I love it.

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  4. UnknownOctober 7, 2015 at 12:28:00 PM GMT+2

    Does your husband "benefit" from when you are in this state of mind?

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    1. ShadowOctober 7, 2015 at 3:27:00 PM GMT+2

      Pick one...
      (a) ladies don't kiss an tell,
      (b) I'm a Scorpio, what do you think

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    2. AnonymousOctober 7, 2015 at 3:50:00 PM GMT+2

      Oh my. She's a Scorp; that says it all. ;)

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  5. AnonymousOctober 7, 2015 at 3:50:00 PM GMT+2

    You can't go wrong when you start a poem/piece like this: "I want you bare."

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  6. XOctober 8, 2015 at 3:02:00 AM GMT+2

    Love that line on needing the naked soul, because the body is one thing - but without a soul its just another vessel.

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  7. Eddie BluelightsOctober 14, 2015 at 3:46:00 PM GMT+2

    If you absolutely insist . . . how could I refuse a lady . . . :) x

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