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I have an image in my mind, you are pinned to the floor, have no-where to go, by my body that is holding you down, skin to searing skin, and I look into your eyes, drink you in until we sink, you sink into my body and I sink into your soul; slowly, deeper, to the moment of admission when you move parameters beyond known bounds. Take what you must, provide what I must have, I am yours to own, if you give me what I want.
Gulp !!
ReplyDeleteSomehow, i find this more mystical than sensual. It reads like an erotic piecce but to me it seems more like how the mystics talk of achieving unity with the divine. It got me thinking about how scriptures contain hidden messages about the human experience and the cosmic physicality being one and the same, and that through severe austerity of the mind one may realise spiritual awakening.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly penned. Thanks for sharing it here :)
Hope it's all right I did see the sensual, as that's just where my mind went...
ReplyDeleteI admire the imagery, like the twining of two souls before destruction or death ~
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Very creatively written. Sensuous yet deeply erotic... Wonderful piece......
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I think it is just hot.
ReplyDeleteSelf-destruction or addition?
ReplyDeleteAs if a huge powerful force is controlling the mind, body and soul.
ReplyDeleteAt first I thought you were leading us to something fatal....but then, the twist here seemed a bit erotic. I LIKE it. Very much.
ReplyDeleteThat was really sexy!
ReplyDeleteOnly pictures drawn through words is all i can offer, yet you my dear, dear friend are more than welcome to come, bring a nice rocker and share the conversation. you are so always willing to give up place of self for another--if that is not worthy of a place on the porch then little is.
ReplyDeleteWow, Shadow!!
ReplyDeleteI love that you could easily be talking to yourself or to God on some level.
ReplyDeleteI have a completely different take on this. To me, it was creepy, almost stalker-ish - guess that shows you where my mind is at!
ReplyDeleteVery powerful, no matter the interpretation.
I can think of no more pleasurable of a crucifixion than to be pinned to the floor by someone trying to see inside me as i slip inside them.
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