take my hand, fly with me
jump into the abyss
and soar on the currents of the wind
over rooftops
down to the trees
touching the water's crests
leaving a trail of blazing light
and lungs breathless
before rising high
high into blue skies
towards the sun
towards the stars
towards the welcome blackness
of a beyond
never-ending
29 cool comments:
Shadow, I am always most seduced by your shadowy words...
If my imagination does not go somewhere it's never been, what else is there for it to do?
If it goes somewhere none have ever been, it can lead us all to that unsurpassed happiness, our goal, perfect peace, perfect love.
You, Shadow are one of those imaginative "leaders" IMO.
Gratias
Leaves me wanting more Shadow.
♥
Trust! Jump! Fly! ♥
Beautiful!
Thank you, andrea
That was way cool! Love it!
Have a Happy Day, Shadow!
xox
What a beautiful poem. To fly is always fascinating. With you, even more. I love it.
Oh somedays I would definately take your hand a fly away but today isn't one of those. Love the fantasy escapism.
Peace and Love
Scott
Magical, beautiful!
Your poem has me soaring. :)
PG
Shadow awesome again you inspire me to continue to write poetry. I don't post as much as you but I have so many poems I would like to post but I don't only when the urge arises.
I do love your blog. Thanks for writing all this amazing poetry.
Love you lots
Jbxoxo
OH... I really miss reading you post shadow...
I'm glad I'm back..
you always have a beautiful post
I love it!!!!
-have a nice day my friend
-alvond
the welcome blackness
of a beyond
never-ending???
Wow...simply gr8 tots...
It almost seems possible when you put it like that.
Shadow-if you promise to not bring me back down, I'll trust your wings. a sweet flight. ~rick
you should consider having your prose and poetry published;
it is beyond amazing!
Hello, just wanted to stop by and say how much I've enjoyed reading your posts.
You have a really cool and interesting blog and I look forward to reading more.
Thank you for sharing it !
Man, off into another world.... to escape.... what a graphic! Shadow, well done. Thanks.
All i wanted was a road trip but I can go for this too, take my hand...1...2...3...JUMP!
I'm with you....we can soar together through life as we know it. You are definitely a super lyricist in your own right.
Shadow - This poem resonates deeply within me and the photo to go with it is perfection.
FULL VIEW THIS PHOTO IMMEDIATELY!
I see an angel wearing sunglasses in the nebula.
Gods what a sweet image! Love the silhouette of the Lady With Sonrays in the cloud behind the star there...
Thanks for the visual-- image AND words...
okay!...I think you just took us all there with you
Your poem has a bit of the same feel to it as my last one did, although you clearly are more eloquent and mine was not a poem, but an emotional response to my week and a call for others to do some good. Asking people to fly, as your poem seems to be doing, is often the easy part. The hard part seems to be in getting them to really do it.
Beautiful post Shadow. Thank you.
Marvelous poem, more than a poem to me is the lyric of a song, a song sang by a guy in the 40, with a velvet kind of tone caming out of his mouth. The only part that was out of that time is when it says
Of the beyond never ending. Which is a fantastic philosophical/contemporary phrase
Sounds like a great ride Shadow. I've jumped into the abyss on a submersible before and it was really interesting.
Sighing in blissful surrender. With Raven on the top of my totem, flight and wings is a delightful dream of unmeasurable porportions. (Hugs)Indigo
Im there :o)
Beautiful poetry and imagery. Well done! -Jayne
Ooo, very vivid words and image! love it!
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