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When the
music died,
mist rose
from the ground
like rolling
waves of silence,
engulfing sight
and sound
in its thick
white shroud,
and tears of
sorrow
clung to
lashes
in silent reflection,
before surrendering
to a final
echo.
22 cool comments:
I am cool with everything you wrote Shadow for that is life's way, except the silent desperation part.
I may go down hungry, in poverty, aged, broken and forgotten but I will not go down without a fight.
nice...effective use of language to evoke feeling...i like that song too...smiles...
You are amazing with words.
As always words of magick!
I loved it! Have blessed holidays!
So mistful and warm this hope in search we go...
Merry Xmas girrrl!
;-)
No mincing words here. Blessings to you dear one.
i agree Mark, I've changed it to 'reflection'...
Beautiful. Happy holidays to you, Shadow!
Hope your music never really dies! I understand the poem and really like but find it sad, reminds of a dark place I was in years ago.
Peace Love Light
Very nice Shadow, wishing you a wonderful holiday season. I agree you are amazing with words.
So sad, Shadow. Hope that you had a good Christmas!
i'm with that mark guy! ;)
and nothing could be heard through the silence
G'Day I hope you had a magic christmas my friend. <3
nicely written..
It may be late but not too for the New Year, I hope, at least where I am. Nonetheless, Merry/Happy Christmas, Happy New Year. Love always, Jeanne in Colorado
beautiful shadow...May this new year be filled with blessings for you.
"tears of sorrow clung to lashes in silent reflection"
Ohh, I love that!!
How've you been, girl? I haven't blogged for months and I'm trying to catch up with everyone. I plan to post at least once a week (fingers crossed), so I will be around again. :)
Best wishes for 2012!
Hugs,
JB
Music can never die because it lives on in our memory forever....
thanks for ur comment..u pen so well superb writing..need to hear from u more..good luck..
Nice one!
Take care
I am reading and re reading this text again and again as I like it so much... can't find anything to say because it's all so true, so simply real... Thank you for sharing it, have a nice weekend :-)
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