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She lay in the dark, waiting for the house to fall silent
before sneaking out her window, down the road
to the grand old double storey. Listening to the whispering pine trees
that surround the house, her bare feet pad across the wooden
porch
to the very last window at the end.
She stopped, looking at the window she knew would be open,
at the softly billowing curtains waving her in and to the
bed beyond,
glowing white in the silver full moon.
She slipped through the window towards the motionless figure
watching her,
his chest bare, legs tangled in sheets, and he said “I knew
you would come...”.
His eyes slowly trawled her body, a shockwave of desire rushing
over her skin
that licked the new-found awareness of her senses into an driving
need
that drew him to her and while the stars passed overhead, they
left the night behind.
Then the turning stars in the sky left them with the falling
leaves
of these endless summer nights that they lived with abandon
in the light of the moon and the whispering trees,
who’s needles remain forever, in the dying yellowing
surround.
I am awed.
ReplyDeleteSuch incredible words...a loving romanticism and sensuality to this one.
ReplyDeleteGosh, that was wonderful.
ReplyDeleteOKAY, V., THIS is the one--I now have a NEW favorite of yours. You have simply outdone yourself, and I LOVE it, that last little stanza, a gem in the "Shadow" literature
ReplyDeleteTurning stars--falling leaves, needles lasting forever (as they do) in the approach to winter, summer but a memory...OH WOW!
Beautiful V . . . . Eddie :)
ReplyDeleteAre those lips your's . . lol
What can I say? That was simply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhoa.....does anyone else here feel a need for a cold shower?
ReplyDeleteMe . . . . lol . . . Eddie
DeleteThis lady sure has a way with words . . . lol
So, beautiful! Elegant, powerful and sexy. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteWhoa, that left me out of breath!
ReplyDeleteHey, just how long of a vacation are you going to take? WE MISS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic, V! I loved this image "His eyes slowly trawled her body, a shockwave of desire rushing over her skin
ReplyDeletethat licked the new-found awareness of her senses into an driving need
that drew him to her and while the stars passed overhead, they left the night behind."
Perfect. Erotic, and artful.