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i cannot utter a words for all the emotions that are chasing
through my system. whereas an indolent
satisfaction lingers in my limbs, my mind cannot focus long enough to identify
the words flowing faster, ever faster, through my head. i fold myself in two and wrap my arms around my
legs, rest my chin on my knees and with closed eyes just breathe......... to slow down. to still a racing pulse. but all i feel
is a spinning elation, a tingling on my skin as if cool fingers were caressing
me, and the butterflies return with a rush deep down inside, ‘cause it always ends with music, it always ends with you.............
I can feel the emotions stirring inside as I read this. You're such a sensational writer.
ReplyDeleteReading this felt like falling in love!
ReplyDeleteOxygen, please?
ReplyDeleteIsn't this the sweetest? . I like your words, educing "rush". "slow down" , being caressed...and ending, "always music and you".
ReplyDeleteAGREE with Hootin Annie....SENSATIONAL you are, Shadow!
Very powerful words filled with feelings and expressed dynamically!
ReplyDeleteartmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
I'm always awed by what you write. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThis is cool I like the prose of it, but without losing your normal poetic voice.
ReplyDeleteBTW been pretty busy lately. May want to try another direction you up for that?
I've been trying to still that racing pulse for years now but nothing ever works.
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Very well said. Your words feel so real. I almost always begin and end my day's in music.
ReplyDeletea testament to a night well spent in good company or in sharing an experience only those who were there will truly understand
ReplyDeleteBeautiful moments indeed Shadow. I just wish I had the tummy of the girl in the photo. I don't think I ever did actually. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words with a lovely photo. Your words have so much rhythm to them. I hope you do/will do spoken word poetry. I'm sure you'd be amazing!
ReplyDeletePassionate write, I specially love the ending ~
ReplyDeleteRepeat, in case ya missed it:
ReplyDeleteSENSATIONAL!
With words like that you may seduce me any time . . . . lol
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