
come, take my hand
let me lead you astray
forget all these paths
in this vast array
spread out before you
come, trust in me
i will not coerce you
please come with, freely
come, see the sights
i see through my eyes
let it flow through you
like a fresh new moonrise
and dispel all your fears
come, trust in me
let go of the chains
it’s a burden, heavy
and should we get lost
in this colourful maze
that i have espied
through gilded doorways
we’ll revel enchanted
in sweet air bubbly
why don’t we try it
come, let’s go see?
let me lead you astray
forget all these paths
in this vast array
spread out before you
come, trust in me
i will not coerce you
please come with, freely
come, see the sights
i see through my eyes
let it flow through you
like a fresh new moonrise
and dispel all your fears
come, trust in me
let go of the chains
it’s a burden, heavy
and should we get lost
in this colourful maze
that i have espied
through gilded doorways
we’ll revel enchanted
in sweet air bubbly
why don’t we try it
come, let’s go see?
32 cool comments:
Oh, yes!..Let's go...Beautiful poem!:)
I have followed you...
I have trusted you...
I have enjoyed your mind...
Your thoughts, your emotions....
You, dear Shadow, can be inspirational in all walks!!
Whimsical, lovely, and precious!
The image is also those things...
~Calli
An irresistable invitation!
I feel blessed having read that. Thank you.
On my way!
I would like to go see today. Instead I'm stuck in the office only looking out at the water.
Makes we want to grab my sweetie, and go!
I like it, you're a bit "lighter" today.
Shadow-that read so lovely, like a musical fairy tale. a trip to a special wonderland. I love when you're feeling like this. great pic, also! ~rick
I am there, wonderful poem, one my favorites!!!
I would if I met you probably follow you quite freely, given your enchanting spell with words!
G:-)
awww Shadow.........in a New York second. This is beautiful.
so mesmerizing. very nice. how do you do it everyday...you need to publish these in a book...you have a great talent.
hugs, mile
I'm ready also. Let's go! WAIT...let me get my GPS...
This is just magical!
OH MY GOODNESS! I have goosebumps...seriously.
love this...
Breath takingly beautiful.. I hold out my hand to YOU and walk that path.. SMILES
ooh, I love this...the picture with it is so fitting too!! Good one!
ok ;)
What a lovely invitation. I'm game.
I'd go with you anywhere.
All the paths with you seem bright and beautiful, it is a constant discovering of wonders.
All the best.
Beautiful lines here Shadow! Keep writing!!!
How could anyone not be seduced
by this inspriational poem -
the poem offers hope and peace.
What a delightful invitation! How could I refuse.... come spirit me away..
Blessings, Star
Falling in love, Shadow, taking a risk...this is what these words leave me with. I love this one! Fabulous!
The picture matches perfectly too, the path...how cool :D
xox
yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, and again, i say, YES...
lead on, M'Lady... I'll perchance to see...
SWEET STUFF!
I trust you, which ever direction we go. Let's just go!
In the worlds seen in the mind we find a road to reality.
Yes, you would take any one of us somewhere special. I don't think anyone of us doubts that. You've a magic about you Shadow. Hold onto that.
Ill go there with you shadow!
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