Wednesday, June 24, 2009

come, come with me





come, take my hand
let me lead you astray
forget all these paths
in this vast array
spread out before you
come, trust in me
i will not coerce you
please come with, freely

come, see the sights
i see through my eyes
let it flow through you
like a fresh new moonrise
and dispel all your fears
come, trust in me
let go of the chains
it’s a burden, heavy

and should we get lost
in this colourful maze
that i have espied
through gilded doorways
we’ll revel enchanted
in sweet air bubbly
why don’t we try it
come, let’s go see?





32 cool comments:

dark wings said...

Oh, yes!..Let's go...Beautiful poem!:)

Hootin' Anni said...

I have followed you...
I have trusted you...
I have enjoyed your mind...
Your thoughts, your emotions....
You, dear Shadow, can be inspirational in all walks!!

Calli said...

Whimsical, lovely, and precious!

The image is also those things...


~Calli

Fireblossom said...

An irresistable invitation!

Spiral Dancer said...

I feel blessed having read that. Thank you.

Cat said...

On my way!

Syd said...

I would like to go see today. Instead I'm stuck in the office only looking out at the water.

Lou said...

Makes we want to grab my sweetie, and go!

I like it, you're a bit "lighter" today.

Rikkij said...

Shadow-that read so lovely, like a musical fairy tale. a trip to a special wonderland. I love when you're feeling like this. great pic, also! ~rick

wolfie185 said...

I am there, wonderful poem, one my favorites!!!

Gabriella Moonlight said...

I would if I met you probably follow you quite freely, given your enchanting spell with words!
G:-)

spottedwolf said...

awww Shadow.........in a New York second. This is beautiful.

mile191 said...

so mesmerizing. very nice. how do you do it everyday...you need to publish these in a book...you have a great talent.

hugs, mile

Steve E. said...

I'm ready also. Let's go! WAIT...let me get my GPS...

Mama Zen said...

This is just magical!

Jack said...

OH MY GOODNESS! I have goosebumps...seriously.

in time out said...

love this...

inky said...

Breath takingly beautiful.. I hold out my hand to YOU and walk that path.. SMILES

Noelle said...

ooh, I love this...the picture with it is so fitting too!! Good one!

AlmightyHeidi said...

ok ;)

lakeviewer said...

What a lovely invitation. I'm game.

Sylvia said...

I'd go with you anywhere.
All the paths with you seem bright and beautiful, it is a constant discovering of wonders.
All the best.

Brosreview said...

Beautiful lines here Shadow! Keep writing!!!

Cynthia said...

How could anyone not be seduced
by this inspriational poem -
the poem offers hope and peace.

Star said...

What a delightful invitation! How could I refuse.... come spirit me away..
Blessings, Star

TheChicGeek said...

Falling in love, Shadow, taking a risk...this is what these words leave me with. I love this one! Fabulous!
The picture matches perfectly too, the path...how cool :D
xox

♥ bfs - Mimi ♥ said...

yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, and again, i say, YES...

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

lead on, M'Lady... I'll perchance to see...

SWEET STUFF!

TERI REES WANG said...

I trust you, which ever direction we go. Let's just go!

the walking man said...

In the worlds seen in the mind we find a road to reality.

Woman in a Window said...

Yes, you would take any one of us somewhere special. I don't think anyone of us doubts that. You've a magic about you Shadow. Hold onto that.

Michael said...

Ill go there with you shadow!