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And the darkness stead’ly marches through
the distance, coming near,
bringing in its claws the madness of the
despot who craves fear,
one who feeds on blood-red tears shed by
cowering broken men,
broken by the bonds of heartache so
entrenched they cannot fend
off the nightmares of the days long gone,
playing in their mind,
seeking dogged retribution from a fiend
they cannot find,
for the darkness takes their man, without
question, without thought
to the one who’s left abandoned, tortured
dreams their new cohort.
You have a gift. Everytime i read you, something happens deep inside me. It feels like Autumn in my heart.
ReplyDeleteBlessed be.
dang....ominous and dark....you can tell its election season...haha...and even if this is not a political statement, yikes...nightmare indeed...
ReplyDeleteLiked the starting lines :)
ReplyDeleteFear is such a deadly enemy. Wonderfully written Shadow. Blessings.
ReplyDeleteSee? This is why drugs should be legal. I mean, who the hell can fight such an army of darkness knowing no mercy?
ReplyDeleteWell told as always, V
Yeah Shadow I get this. sometimes I abandon and eaten and sometimes I am abandoned and shredded, I'll be damned if that bastard does not have some long deep penetrating claws. I am good now...back to being pissed off.
ReplyDeleteHey have I told you that of all the blog header pictures I come across I LOVE yours more than any other.
This is dark ... very dark. I hope that's not reflective of your mood.
ReplyDeletexoxox
Awesome, once again! Your gift with language causes internal shifts...
ReplyDeleteToo often, embedded in our writings
ReplyDeleteare personal experiences, but not always.
I'm hoping this is one of those "not always", butt...
Deep (dark) thoughts in rhyme
when we have the time
help us to stay standing
as Peeps around us are landing
on their------
butt in the end
all will be Okay!
Let's live for today.
Love to read you, Shadow, it
brings you so near
while yet so far.
♥ Steve
Comment: This is my second comment...totally different from first, which is spacing past Pluto by now... Wish I could remember--first one was GOOD! (sigh!)
ReplyDeleteTwo sets of tracks, one of mucky-muck. Other shiny, smooth, fast, of steel. I believe (anything!) parallels may meet in the far distance, as the Universe might bend to make it true.
(Well, anything's possible. So WHAT if it's never been seen?)
Often when we write, embedded therein is a little--or a lot--of our experiences. But not always. I cannot but hope (pray) this marvelous piece of yours is in the "not always" category.
Just thinking: "Before and after every darkness is LIGHT!"
Bye
You do have an amazing talent for capturing a mood or feeling and painting it on the page. :-)
ReplyDeletehorror... my fave genre :)
ReplyDeleteShadow Dancing...
ReplyDeleteBroken dreams aren't enough?
They must be TORTURED as well?
Unfortunately you nailed this perfectly.
In typical Shadow style...:-)
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(JUST KIDDING!!!~OUCH! Ok, ok! Put the stick down, please