Tuesday, June 17, 2014

The Whisper

picture credit: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Devil-makes-three-252276998

Who do you think laughed, God or the Devil,
when they heard this urgent whisper:
“Please let me feel this, please let me do this,
I need to know what feelings it brings,
and though I know it’s wrong, I’ll repent the moment after,
but please let me feel this feeling again.”


  1. when all feeling is lost...we will go to great lengths to either feel again,
    or numb what is left...i imagine they have heard it enough that it
    has lost its humor...

  2. Quite a powerful write...wow. I find myself now wondering that this feeling was that he was longing for...

  3. No one laughed, they both sighed.....
    (As we ALL do whenever reading anything from Shadow Dancing)

  4. The answer must be:

    The devil but I'll go to confession tomorrow,
    until the next time

  5. feelings..........................can be painful, can be of happiness, but wonder what it is like to feel nothing!

  6. . . . . . oh! and were you thinking of me?
    If you were I won't bother going to confession at all!!! ROFL

  7. Laughter? I didn't hear any....

    But, I loved it....no matter what your subject is, it never ceases to get me drawn in.

  8. We have to feel what we want to feel, otherwise we can't move on or learn.

  9. Whoa, I've been there, too! In fact, I still am to a much greater extent than I believe I should be.

  10. Chasing the feelings that elude can be a dangerous thing. Been there. Wanted more.

  11. hello shadow its dennis the vizsla dog hay wow that is the spookiest weeping angel wot i hav ever seen!!! it goes verry wel with yore spooky poem i am pritty shoor it wuz the devil wot laffd that time!!! ok bye