over my mind a thick mist hangs
dulling all the senses
mirroring clouds hanging above
over invisible fences
thoughts move drowsily
through a veil
of silence
which i inhale
limbs in repose
emotions tame
tranquility
lays its claim
dulling all the senses
mirroring clouds hanging above
over invisible fences
thoughts move drowsily
through a veil
of silence
which i inhale
limbs in repose
emotions tame
tranquility
lays its claim
32 cool comments:
Tranquility is good. I'm there.
what a beautiful sharing of peace!
this is one of those that leaves me tranquil when i read it.
Beautiful image, words, and sounds...
Thick mist, drowsy fog, yep. That sounds like me this morning. I think I'll choose to view it as tranquility rather than exhaustion. Seems so much nicer that way.
Nice one Shadow.
Beautiful, silent, serenity...(Hugs)Indigo
I love the traquility of sitting in the field with my dogs on a spring evening like last night watching the trains in the valley below, sooo serene.
Yes after my mid life crisis at 40 I am getting back into blogging and feel better for it.
Your place made the news on UK TV about the election and all that, I would love to travel round africa, Louise (Miss Bickerdyke) who is in the next office said I really should get out and explore the world
I think you should put together a book! You are talented!
Tranquility lays it claim through this. A respite of a poem. I need to memorize this. Wonderful work, Shadow.
very beautiful piece! so calming, tranquil and serene. thanks!
Ah, it's been years since I've had a moment like this. I yearn for it. Kinda was yearning for it in my float poem today.
Nice
slow
thick, yet thin.
Ahhhh, I want to go lay down now :)
Tranquility is nice :)
It makes me feel calm...like I can feel the cold air around me...love it~!
I posted a poem on my second blog....'Life say what!?' at....http://crazyincolor.blogspot.com
"tranquility"... the word alone is a masterpiece. Lovely Shadow!
oh to be claimed by such a fine thing as that!
I love how the calm blue color stands out on the black and white. Beautiful!
Gol-dang-it! Oddest thing. I mean the coincidence.
Coming home from a meeting this morning I ran into thick veils of actual smoke, and I LOVE the smell! It is "fire season" here. And it was eerie as you describe in today's poem of peacefulness:
"...through a veil
of silence
which i inhale..."
Simply beautifully written, as (ahhhhhhh!) usual.
Love this, Shadow! especially "tranquility lays its claim." -
as if it must!
~Calli
beautiful...zen! ♥
Shads-you describe tranquility perfectly. Pic ain't bad either. Good stuff, you! ~rick
Really liked this poem, one of my favourite words, Serenity.
CJ xx
This is so peaceful!
One of your finest works. This is beautiful!!! Keep them coming Shadow!!!
Can I have some??? :)
Keep rolling my dear Shadow!!
You are unique to combine Words and Pictures.
I do think I can read between the lines you are longing for change ---
I say no more.
For me tranquility = serenity and peace of mind. They are priceless and worth anything to attain and maintain.
Love Ya,
Prayer Girl
Shadow, very nice and peaceful. Thank you dear for sharing!
mirroring clouds hanging above
over invisible fences
...some words are just meant to go together to bring life to a poem. Beautiful! The pictures you choose are amazing. :)
I love that word...
Tranquility...an awesome word and a great piece of writing. I could feel myself moving thru it. Brilliant piece. Thanks for writing it Shadow.
Love
JB
tranquility
lays its claim
Nice!
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