Friday, December 4, 2009

55 - the aura of love








with these eyes i plainly see
words you choose to hide from me
as i feel waves roll from your heart
when emotions through you dart
and my cheeks feel wet with tears
when you’re faced with dark frontiers
so rest yourself in my aura of love
and soak in the soothing light from above






every friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man





51 comments:

  1. So very peaceful. I want to rest in His love to desperately. Thank you Shadow. Very timely, very timely and beautiful!!

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  2. Beautiful as always - Great words. Great flow.

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  3. a wonderful invite, I a glad who loves the sea, the sound of the waves, feel this magnetic energy from this write.. GREAT WRITING


    Wishing you a wonderful weekend of fun and laughter.. HUGS

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  4. Shadow....this one made tears well....it's tender, loving and I felt comfort in your words today.

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  5. Now this is what love should be! Beautiful 55, Shadow!

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  6. So hopeful, so soothing. Just what I needed today..

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  7. I have given you an award!

    Check it out below!!

    http://sharoninwonderland.blogspot.com/2009/12/blog-post_04.html

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  8. Save me a spot I ain't done doing what needs be done yet.

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  9. I wish your Shadow persona could be joyful...
    Sandi

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  10. I think you could become a billionaire writing cards for Lovers.

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  11. My hubby had bipolar disorder and is on very strong meds, so I live this way as I watch his emotions and I am so glad I am here for him. This is lovely, warm, caring, observant, very good post. Hugs!

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  12. So, so beautiful. Uplifting. and the title is perfect!

    Have a great weekend, Shadow~
    Calli xo

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  13. Basking in the Sunlight of the Spirit...very moving 55! Happy Friday my friend.

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  14. You could put music with many of the things you write. I thought about that as I read some of your archived material that there could be songs there.

    I am sorry if that was obvious and I missed it.


    Kindest regards,
    Tom Bailey

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  15. Beautifully done, Shadow. It's what she does for me - what you do for him. I imagine that this has always described the epitome of the relationship between man and woman - no matter if that man came from from the hunt with a spear in his hand, to the comforts of the cave or if he came home from the office, parked the Mercedes and opened the door to their mansion.

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  16. beautiful, absolutely beautiful, such a treat to read as usual. mine is up too

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  17. Such a mixture of happiness and sadness. Loved this. :)

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  18. peaceful and beautiful, a wonderful way to start the weekend!

    smiles,

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  19. oh MY! You beautiful woman of beautiful words... your love aura invades me so sweetly...

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  20. whew
    I felt that one to my core.
    I'll take it to heart, and soak in the soothing light from above, yesterday I needed it in particular.
    55 and rhyme, you are a quick one!
    Thanks

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  21. You are total Love Shadow Dancing!
    Wallowing in your Aura would be Heaven!
    Perfect 55..
    Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

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  22. I have re-entered the world of blogdom again and your poem just sums up the peace I feel when out of body, good to see you in fbook as well

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  23. Very loving and lovely.
    You wrote to me about sliding into the holiday blues, and I hear music here.

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  24. wonderful . among of al these words i felt a shell of love . i want t rest my feeling in it .

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  25. With eyes closed we can see some things clearly.

    Secretia

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  26. wonderful 55...very timely in my life as well. have a great weekend.

    mine is up!

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  27. It makes me wish I could be with the real person I love

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  28. ooohhhh... i love this.... *pause for girlie sigh*

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  29. Nice Shadow. I like the sea imagery.

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  30. Shadow, dear Shadow... your words often soothe my spirit, taking me to serene places. Marvelous 55!!!

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  31. fantastic! truly beautiful...nothing better than basking in another's aura of love...

    much love

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  32. A familiar landscape, drawn out with beautiful words. Another very nice 55, Shadow!

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  33. You must know already that I love this 55. I'm a huge fan of your words.

    PG

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  34. So comforting, so soothing, beautifull words.
    Thanks friend

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  35. Beautiful..."words you choose to hide from me..." I can relate to these words very strongly. :)

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  36. You have an award on arise 2 write.
    andrea

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  37. So I'm a bit late to this one, but wow, this is so amazingly loving and comforting...thank you!

    Love
    g

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  38. love that gives and takes. we can keep one another safe like that.
    xo
    erin

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  39. Yearning is a much under-rated emotion.

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  40. I think this one we could each be claiming and repeating to our Self.

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