Friday, October 12, 2012

55 - Forever you



picture credit: http://fibulamim.deviantart.com/art/goodbye-63855036



I wish I could, for one last time,
hold you near and hear the rhyme
your breath of love leaves on my skin,
and feel the trust you have within,
for me to be the one you chose
to spend your time with, ‘til it slows,
I whisper my devotion true,
‘Today, tomorrow, forever, you.’



20 comments:

  1. Wow ... this one is so passionately written ... loved it !!!

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  2. ugh, your loss is palpable....if only one more day...i am sorry.....the rhyme of your breathe of love...i like that...

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  3. V E R E N A !!! This is the kind of stuff I wish I had written. So much beautiful "Imagery" (as poets like to say--grin!) in your inspired words, causing the memory-minds of whoever reads this post to sit back, relax in gratitude, that God allows (allowed) us such special glimpses into His OWN Psyche...LOVE!

    Also wish I could be as non-bloviating, as you, in your posts...and in my comments. HA! But, it'll never happen. So THERE!
    So much Peace and Joy sent
    your way
    Today.

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  4. You never lose love as long as you have memory of that slight breeze on your skin my friend you will feel it caressing you. If you are sad let us all be sad for a time together for you are never without love.

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  5. First an involuntary smile, Then a shiver up my spine.
    Shadow Dancing, you are A Rose Among The Thorns...
    I'm truly blessed to be privy to your beautiful mind.
    Loved your passionate 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for the rare but MUCH appreciated literary treasure, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. I'd like to think we'll all get a chance in this lifetime to feel this way.
    It means we've loved
    And in love, loss is inevitable.
    Lovely words as always, shads
    ~rick

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  7. This is almost like a sweet prayer. I love the rhyme, it reminds me of the swings in your photo, slow and steady.. Have a great weekend Shadow

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  8. I see what Melissa is saying, and, yes, I agree. Lovely.

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  9. So much passion in just 55! YOU ROCK THIS!!! I truly love LOVE your romantic poem. Love the rhyme, very soothing. Mine is here
    Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  10. That last line says it all ~ I feel your loss ~

    Nice to see you playing the FF, I missed this out last week ~

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  11. This one rolls off the tongue, as a good poem should.

    And love the photo...goes well together.

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  12. Beautiful! I feel your loss. Sending lots of love your way.

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  13. a complete surrender towards a loved one and the loss of that person is very much evident,wish we could all be with the one whom we truly love.

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